Poetry Critiques : In My Isolation

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  1. truetothecause

    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In my Isolation

    I see Visions of what could BE
    I experience the Loneliness of WE
    I execute the Remedy
    That will help get us FREE

    In my Isolation

    I fulfill my Destiny
    I realize the dream of Unity
    I witness the birth of OUR Glory
    Finally the telling of OUR Story

    In my Isolation

    I crave the touch of YOU
    I weep for the loss of YOU
    I grieve for the plight of YOU
    I yearn to see and know the fight in YOU

    Fighting for OUR right to BE
    Fighting to RE~gain the crown for M.E.
    Fighting without cease for the wisdom of WE
    Fighting to just get dang FREE

    Free to Think Deeply
    Free to Feel Passionately
    Free to Do that which only WE can DO

    In my Isolation

    I live out all my Fantasies
    I ride the waves of Ecstasy
    I’m wrapped in the warmth of our shared Livity
    I erupt with one touch from Thee

    In my Isolation

    Harmony reigns Supreme
    Order is not taken to the Extreme
    Balanced I am~ enough to walk the Beam
    Truth is all which is Seen
    Reciprocity is what keeps it all Moving
    Propriety takes over as the natural state of BE~ing
    Justice is a living Reality

    In my Isolation

    :hearts2:
     
  2. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice piece!
     
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    sista TTTC

    i feel your love

    i feel your pain

    i feel your purpose

    i feel your vision

    keep pushing you will get where you need to be

    faith is internal

    believing is gut wrenching

    you have to really want it

    keep praying for us sista

    we will cross this mountain


    AGAIN
     
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    When I think of the extent of what could be remedied when we allow our minds to envision the possibilities. There is such power and determination in your words sister.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    things untouched this was a great write and well done keep it like tis sis.....
     
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