Quiet Poetry Lounge : In My Head

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  1. Flor_Rosada

    Flor_Rosada Member MEMBER

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    I cried to myself last night in bed,
    Been havin alot of things goin on in my head.

    The constant struggle between being true to myself and others run a narrow line,
    A line much smaller than this stanza of mine.

    Too many choices, too many decisions, not enough time,
    No warning signals, not even a sign.

    I cried to myself last night in bed,
    Been havin alot of things goin on in my head.

    Working late night hours' catch up to anyone in a heartbeat,
    Working hard hours, six at the most and six days a week.

    Tryin to make ends meet but turn in other directions in someway,
    Eventually the neutral line fades.

    I cried to myself last night in bed,
    Been havin alot of things goin on in my head.

    My head hangs low only in sadness and anger,
    What have I done wrong to ever let a relationship with my soul tear.

    I think everyday, what can I do to stop my constant struggle,
    Im not a unscrupulous person, is my dillemas stoppable?

    Many question for many things,
    My conscience, my soul, will my head continue to hang?
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many things spinning in your head at one time, got to slow down that pace, head won't continue to hang forever. Keep writng, I'll keep reading.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling u here indeed the thoughts will lessing as u continue
    this was felt
     
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    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've been there, can relate. keep striving to the top.....
     
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