Black Poetry : In my face.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jul 23, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its been almost two years now..
    sinds we broke up..
    Acctualy its 4 years because you broke away from me..
    sinds you got on that plane.....
    So now you wanna know whats going on in my life?
    So why are you hiding?
    What do you got to hide?
    are you hiding from yourself?
    Are you hiding from youre own lies?
    You wanna know whats going on in my life?

    Why dont you just ask me..?
    Face!
    instead of searching on youre own..
    Afraid of confrontation?
    You always have......
    In the relationship it was there...
    You where afraid of confronting yourself or be honest about it
    of what was realy going on inside of you..
    Are you afraid of me?
    Afraid of the mirror i will hold for you...
    so that you can see yourself...
    I,m not afraid for mine...
    i,m not afraid for the mirror...
    not at all..
    i learn from it..
    give me the mirror...

    are you angry..
    ar you hurt....
    relieved...
    Tell it to my face...
    come on....
    put it on the table..
    Take off the Jacket..
    glasses
    and hat...
    I,m not afraid of what is under there...
    i have seen you naked before and i loved you remember?
    and i faced it that moment i left...

    is there more?
    there is isnt it?
    always had that feeling...
    positive or negative...

    Tell it ..
    Tell it to my face..
    if you dont...
    it will stay there..
    as long as you live..
    like an echo in youre mind...

    come on ..
    get it off youre chest..
    so you can put it to rest..
    I remember you where supossed to tell me sumthing...?

    you said: " My soul loves you but here on earth things happening
    but if i tell you this than...........""

    "than what "" i said.......
    You think things are going to get worser than what i,ve already been through?

    Believe me i have seen a lot..
    learned a lot...
    So the choice is yourse..

    Tell it to others..
    or tell it to my face..
    i choose for the last one...
    cause than i can give it..
    a place............
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey libertylaida
    this is very deep
    feeling you
    on this
    flow as you pour
    much love :heart:
    Peace
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes feeling dis here and what u saying
    tyte open flow
     
  4. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whhhhhhhhhhhhooooooooooooaaaa! This is deep fo sho!

    Feelin you. I've got one of those x's that just pop up every now and then and say they have a pourpose, but never come wit it.
    This is off the chain.
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: this is so reall... I love the way you portrayed this...
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked the way u came wit this one...very heartfelt...:)
     
  7. MacGeo

    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    HI Liberty
    The past can hardly pass away without wounds and the scars are always there to remember.TODAY,ALWAYS REMEMBER THE PAINS OF YESTERDAY TO BE MORE CAREFUL TOMORROW.
    GIRL;YOU WILL SURVIVE THE PAIN IN YOUR HEART....
    MacGeo
     
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