Black Poetry : In Motion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, May 12, 2002.

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    In Motion

    The lame I slaughter like in the same order alphabetical
    Like aspirins I’m medical plastering many hypothetical
    Question, like Kobe Bryant I’m a Ben Kinobe giant athletical
    Harmonize in color be wise like an owl my brother
    Spit wisdom with rhymes use a system online and discover
    A new design, like the French a lover of fine wine shook hands with
    Frankenstein, like mistook plans my mind fall blind for gifts
    Eat legit Soul food and spit magnitude that serves cats like
    Vampires at campfires disturb bats nerds are the fat type
    Make a distribution of goods like the constitution hard like wood
    Got the solution for the hood like the guillotine use execution all I could
    Rhymes corrosive like rust time explosive like a bomb thrust
    Decrease frictions and like god put the beast on restrictions
    Like the book of Revelation shook a whole creation with predictions
    The whore in scarlet was even more symbolic her rafter was mean
    In chapter seventeen John was moved by the way she grooved on the scene
    Jezebel fell to hell and eaten by dogs so her spirit still remain in the fog
    She became a piece of land after the dogs bowels moved and she clog
    The air with legal evil just to mention her name bring lame situation //
    Like an addiction drug taken by thugs faking their luck they’re like
    Clean metal the dirt gleam and settle to the bottom of the pipe
    It’s all rotten hype like car trotting down the turnpike or bike
    With a flat tire I want a hood brat and sapphire to bling on my neck

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
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    The lame I slaughter like in the same order alphabetical
    Like aspirins I’m medical plastering many hypothetical
    Question, like Kobe Bryant I’m a Ben Kinobe giant athletical
    Harmonize in color be wise like an owl my brother
    Spit wisdom with rhymes use a system online and discover
    A new design, like the French a lover of fine wine shook hands with
    Frankenstein, like mistook plans my mind fall blind for gifts
    Eat legit Soul food and spit magitude that serve cats like
    Vampires at campfires disturb bats nerds are the fat type
    Make a distribution of goods like the constitution hard like wood
    Got the solution for the hood like the guillotine use execution all I could
    Rhymes corrosive like rust time explosive like a bomb thrust
    Decrease frictions and like god put the beast on restrictions
    Like the book of Revelation shook a whole creation with predictions
    The whore in scarlet was even more symbolic her rafter was mean
    In chapter seventeen John was moved by the way she grooved on the scene
    Like an addiction drug taken by thugs faking their luck they’re like
    Clean metal the dirt gleam and settle to the bottom of the pipe
    It’s all rotten hype like car trotting down the turnpike or bike
    With a flat tire I want a hood brat and sapphire to bling on my neck

    MADDRAPPER PEACE



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    Re$pekt
    I'm ****in Your *****!

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    05-11-2002 08:17 AM

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    dat was hit, had a nice flow to it



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    05-11-2002 08:57 AM

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    Re$pekt thanks for peeping this one for real



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    Creatine
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    05-11-2002 09:41 AM

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    Flow was good, no punch lines no real word play....good vocab....keep spittin


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    05-11-2002 01:40 PM

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    CreatineTHANKS FOR PEEPING THIS RIGHT HERE FOR REAL GOT TO KEEP ON DROPPING



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    tragik_05
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    05-11-2002 07:15 PM

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    nice creativity & vocab..i love reading ya ****..u should get an album down mosdef


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    philej math
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    05-12-2002 01:22 AM

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    yeah man this was pretty ill, the best I've read from ya yet I think.. but my memories only goes back a couple dyas.. still so finely smooth with the flow, good mutli's and dope meaning, with some off the hook switching up. pz. philej.


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    JasonArles
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    05-12-2002 02:03 AM

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    pretty nice verse word UP


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    05-13-2002 02:51 PM

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    tragik_05, philej math AND JasonArles THANKS FOR PEEPING THIS FOR REAL YO REALLY APPRECIATE THAT
     
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