Black Poetry : IN MINE EYES

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  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In Mine Eyes©

    A Million days in you arm’s is where I plan to be…
    Filling my mind with thoughts of how to please thee…
    I would love to describe to you

    Every

    Single

    Tingle

    Mine Eyes bask in private water delights…glazed over by a single fantasy of Me and Thee…
    Played out in the shadows of my passion-deprived mind.

    Eyelids flutter like butterflies wings as my mind sing songs of
    Me and Thee…

    Bouts of flashing lights hide behind each flutter, a quite spring storm without the thunder…
    quite rains and bright lights bolts and shocks each scene of my
    e-v-e-r-l-a-s-t-i-n-g
    Fantasy,
    of
    Me and thee…

    Just then…I imagine feeling your hand caress my face as you nestle your head between my shoulders and neck,
    Loving me completely – completely loving me…
    Until mine on tingles return as throbs…
    As I fight to release feelings on paper…before it’s too late…
    Each thrust feeling me with enough love to face life,
    E-V-E-R-Y-D-A-Y,
    Followed by a tender kiss, a deeper thrust and a constant moan of my name, coupled with an,
    I love you,
    Three words softly find their way to my heart to caress every troubled beat…
    And once again flashing light’s and quite rains fill the rooms of my mind as you pull me closer and closer until our hearts obey the beat of one...

    Dreams or Fantasies…
    Although these dreams leaves wet tracks upon my face…these are my fantasies of me and thee…

    In Mine Eyes…

    Written By: Tia Williams
    04/13/04
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet and warm flow the beauty of this
    was like a river of rapture running free
    tyte
     
  3. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Believe me when I say....

    "I look forward to your comments"
    They encourage me...
    Your thoughts matter to me...and I know you not...

    Thank you....Thank you
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicley done
    felt the warmth just flow
    thanks for sharing
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for Beautiful_by_me eye's only

    Beautiful_by_me, the way you put it, that is love
    Wonderfully your pen has been inspired from above


    Beautiful_by_me, Seize the day
    great poem you have made!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was so strongly emotive, you can just feel the words gripping at the soul.
     
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