Black Poetry : in love

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have fallen in love
    with memories of your face
    because its been so long
    since my last glance
    i am chasing dreams of your touch
    with every touch of my pillow
    imagining my yesterday was now
    or better yet tomorrow today
    so i could be one day closer
    one dream further
    to seeing ur face
    getting embraced
    and breaking up with my past
    to only comitt to the future
    i know its been two years
    but lets leave all the detours destractions and destruction
    behind us
    congradulations
    im so happy we found us
    unifying balance with dedication
    tel the middle man to grab a suit n tie
    be ur best man
    cuz im so happy HE united us
    so now i can stop dreaming
    stop feining
    and fall in love with u
    and leave my memories in the past.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The entire poem touched me, but I found the above lines in particular to be creatively posed and quite endearing. Great to read you again poetess.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the beauty one's hold in da mind can cascade a feeling untouched
    when one is in loved .......nice to be reading u again Daroc
     
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