Black Poetry : In Love With True Love

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She had missed true love

    Cause previous years bore no
    physical resemblance of the
    touch she knew and desired...

    well, not of the kind she wanted

    There's this bond she shared
    that transcended those long years

    Kind of special and...

    deeply felt

    Her love for the love she loves
    remained half of a sin...

    since hers belonged to another...

    born of weakness and deception

    She vowed to be bold and
    take her true love by the hand

    She promised to keep firm her
    grip on it through clasped hands

    Love heard her call a thousand times
    but remained oblivious to her sound

    for...

    it had been hurt...

    much deeper than she could repent

    And love bleeds pain when wounded

    This time, she yelled at the top of her
    lungs; so alive with remorseful tendencies...

    Love couldn't help but hear

    Wanting to give her half the chance to
    feel its gentle touch once again...

    Love replied...

    gracefully and elegantly

    Holding her abandoned heart in its breath,
    Love touched her gently

    She remembered this feeling through the
    wells of her eyes now flowing with tears

    She counted the escaped sighs of disbelief
    she often sighed when Love touched her
    that way

    Then...

    quietly, with a simple kiss,

    she was forgiven

    and fell in love with Love again

    ©GQINC2002
     
  2. MrAdams

    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    -Gq-

    -poem- simple but sweet.. the ladies will enjoy reading this poem..:D

    have a nice day pal..
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    you are amazing... i'm feelin' this one & You
    know it! i won't say anything else. :)

    AlwaysAlwaysLove.
    BlakGurl :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ

    ya vibing like a ladies man on dis tyght piece
    she wanted love to love and be loved :D
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He strikes again....

    GQ,

    brother I see that you are still dropping gems, not like I expected anything less form the "GQ man". Do your thing bruh...bless us all.

    blak
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you

    laid this one down dun

    peace
    GQ

    DSS
     
  7. dnommo

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    Gentleman of Quality has dropped another gem fro the masses...you making it hard for me to maintain crowd control...

    tight scribe bro'
     
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