Black Poetry : In love with a woman...........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't know what to think about my title

    Don't know what I am speaking on

    I must admit you caught me red handed
    I'm in love with a woman

    Yes, not just any woman but a real special woman

    5'3 with a whole lot to love

    A killer smile

    and sometimes can be a hell raiser

    I have never told ones that are close to me
    that I am in love with a woman

    Because they wouldn't understand

    I use to envy her

    I wanted to be liked just like her

    Never felt in sync with her

    I worship her in my sick ways

    I tried to make myself look like her, act like her

    But would come up with me

    One day I approach her gently

    Because I knew she wouldn't understand
    why I must reach out to her

    Somehow I needed her more than I needed myself

    I look deeply into her eyes

    I studied the very window to her soul

    From the top of her head to the bottom of her feet

    I wanted to touch her

    To see if she was soft as others' had spoken of

    I wanted to smell her

    To see if she smelled as sweet as the others' had spoken of

    I wanted to make love to her

    To see if it was good as the others' had spoken of

    I became obsessed with her

    I wanted her for my own

    What could I do?
    I could no longer hide my true feelings

    I love her

    The smile she carries warms many souls

    The laughter that comes from her mouth many enjoyed

    and the sounds of her voice many love to hear

    [email protected] I want you

    I must have you

    I come closer
    you inch back

    I come closer
    you inch back even more

    I put my hands out to touch your face

    Your breast, your chest moving in a hurry

    Fingers sweating from the anticipation

    The hunger in my eyes for you

    I needed you

    I touched you and you didn't cringe

    I moved in to touch your lips

    You didn't move

    I moved closer to wrap my arms around you

    You didn't move
    you've allowed me to come close to you

    To be near you

    as I am in awe of your beautiful nature
    your warm spirit

    You let go of your wall

    I was elated of how you allowed me this first time to be with you

    For this was your first time

    Each promising to be gentle with each other because of

    Heartache, heartbreak, and disappointments

    We closed our eyes and just laid down to the sounds of our

    warm breathe

    and the rising of our breasts

    and the unison of beating hearts

    I stroke your face and you stroke mine

    So beautiful this experience is to me

    Looking at the clock you tell me you must go

    A tear fell from my blue eyes

    Your brown eyes not wanting to leave

    You kiss me goodbye

    You closed the door

    and the trace of your prescence is still upon the bed

    as I glide my hands to where you lay

    I couldn't help to imagine you

    I couldn't help to say, "Who was that girl"?

    I'm so in love with her now...........

    and that woman is

    is

    is

    is

    is

    me...........



    copyright 2007

    Lavette112



    My friends for a long time I didn't love myself and now I do. I embrace myself. I love myself even more now. I had to realize that noone can love you like you do yourself. So my friends love yourself then you can learn to love others. Love you all.................
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Nevar...

    I must say the ending wasn't expected.:)

    We should love ourselves before we spread it to others.

    Great message!


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i learn to love me so i can love all ......great write sis
     
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    Writing poetry is my first love, the second is reading poetry.
    It is a wonderful experience to be inspired by another poet's talent.

    I knew where this poem was going, I was compelled
    to read on...because the feeling of enpowerment I received from
    reading your words were.....Phenomenal!

    FIVE STARS :spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar: Poetess!
    This was one helluva of a drop! Nevar :welldone:


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was pretty sure you were speaking of yourself in this piece, and so happy that you were, for to love yourself for all that you are, focusing on all the positives that is you, is quite a blessing. Wonderful write.
     
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    yes sis, self love is the ultimate, and when he or she leaves. when daddy or mommy can't stay. If true love is found within yourself, then all will be okay.
    Be blessed sis. I'm glad you made it through.
    LOVE ON! LOVE ON!
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was fantastic Navar...I feel you...Im on the LOVE ME voyage as well honey gurl.....I had a feeling you was talking about yourself...I have read too much of your stuff to think it really was another woman....lol.
     
  8. nevar

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    thank you all for understanding the importance of self love!
     
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    AWESOME....

    Awesome flow.. nevar.. I miss you and her too.
     
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    wow this was off the hook but i thoughtsomething kinky would come out of this for real
     
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