Black Poetry : in his time...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 29, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I took your hand
    Held as if it
    Was my own…
    You made me smile
    Laugh and now cry..
    You took my world and made me
    Trust again
    Open my eyes and held my hand
    As well…
    Now your gone…
    My love was not enough
    To hold you
    As it should but I tried
    And got hurt..
    Now I walk away and
    I am gone….
    I will not turn back
    For it is the finally chapter
    Of you and I
    Now I will cry I will fuss
    Try to fight the pain..
    Just know I will heal…
    In a time….
    I will be stronger in away
    That the love you claim
    Was never true just help me

    blackangel2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaa! deep scribe but well felt
    i know about pain and trust , let the emotions flow
    it heals
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$....and Olakuoto..thanks for the read
    it means alot
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe:)
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks swtt
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautiful...i feel your pain for real...much love for this
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i,m in .......
    youre flow...sisa ....
    i,m feeling it feeling it..

    keep writing sis..

    Love l
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LibertyLady...thanks means alot more when someone can feel the emotions on stuff i write...thanks for the read
     
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    WELL WHAT I HAVE TO SAY ABOUT THIS IS BEEN THERE DONE THAT...AND DON'T LET IT KEEP U DOWN ALTHOUGH YOUR FEELIN' THE PAIN RIGHT NOW...DO SUMPTIN' TO KEEP U GOIN' TO TAKE YA MIND OFF THE SUBJECT OF HURT AND DISTRUST...NOTHING HURTS MORE THAN PITY AND SORROW ITSELF.

    FIGHT THE FIGHT MY FRIEND AND KEEP YA HEAD UP...BETTA DAYS IS COMING AROUND AGAIN...JUST LOOK IN THE MIRROR CAUSE U CAN'T EVEN SEE THAT WITH A HUNG DOWN HEAD...KEEP IT UP....ONE
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh so true..
    but my head not hung down low..
    i am who i am...
    one thing for sure ...
    my head is always up......
    strong black and proud to be a QUEEN that i am...
    now you see
    i am the true BLACKANGEL...
    thanks for the read:toast: