Black Poetry : In her Nights

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Auroraflower, Sep 3, 2005.

  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she takes a few steps to the window..
    and stands still ....

    shuffles the curtain ...
    and starts to roam...


    echo,s off trouble times ...
    people struggling hearts...


    makes it more cold...



    Silent she stares at her best friend...

    "'the morning star"'......



    the big Galaxy...


    she smiles....




    than cries.....









    and asks......


















    "' where are you my love""
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baby I am right here. lol sorry I had to do that. You always show love on my pieces and yours just made me want to respond to that.

    Mannie
    Host and Poet of the Verbal High
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice soft piece I enjoyed it

    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words easily and gently spoken, meaning so much. I really liked the impact of this piece.
     
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