Black Poetry : In Her Eyes

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In Her Eyes
    They tell all that is needed
    It is so clear

    In Her Eyes
    They tell so many things
    When she has things of concern
    So extra hold her near

    In Her Eyes
    Look deep
    Fix your eyes upon
    Her heart, her soul, and mind
    She is serious, passionate
    Dedicated, hard working
    Sweetheart one of a kind

    Even when she is sleeping
    Look upon her face
    With her eyes closed
    Her loving sprit is to comprehend

    Dedicate yourself to her
    She will look for you to succeed
    Especially cause you see
    In Her Eyes
    You are the one she loves
    In Her Eyes
    You are her King!​
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee:

    In your eyes
    strenght and compassion
    tenderly embraces she
    you need not worry
    for she luvs thee
    completely and deeply
    In your eyes
    is where she
    not only wants to be
    but chooses to be
    safely you keep
    her in your eyes



    Your poem is beautiful!!!!

    Much Luv & Peace,

    ~4EVER :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    something about dem eyez ....awesome piece
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother $$RICH$$
    Brother your support has always been powerful and strong!

    Thank you for the response and read.
    Keep On Keeping On.

    There is something... about dem Eyes!

    If you look deep into them
    She may become shy
    And monetarily look astray,
    Staring back at her man with
    Those beautiful eyes and smile is her play
    That only means she loves you
    Admiring her that way!


    But she is in the Tight Grip
    Of arms around her waist.

    Then she may respond.. "What"?
    Give a Martin.. "Girl it's You!

    That has me looking... :)

    Into Your
    Eyes like I do.
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~4EVER :heart:

    Thank You for your read and your flow.
    Inspiration You Are!

    How it matters to a man
    To know his woman loves him so much

    Storms and the Elements
    Fire and the Rain

    Doesn't have an effect
    How "tenderly she embraces"
    He "need not worry"


    In your eyes
    strenght and compassion
    tenderly embraces she
    you need not worry
    for she luvs thee
    completely and deeply
    In your eyes
    is where she
    not only wants to be
    but chooses to be
    safely you keep
    her in your eyes
    In Her Eyes
    She feeds all needs

    In Her Eyes
    I see she loves
    Ever so deeply
    What is needed to completely be

    What she gets in return
    She deserves more

    In Her Eyes
    I see
    She is satisfied
    To satisfy me

    Keeping me on my game
    Worthy of
    Much loved is her touch

    So I strive
    Making short term goals
    With her
    Long term plans and such

    In Her Eyes
    I want to remain

    I need… and I yearn
    Let me say her smile

    Could not be over looked
    Her lips dressed in lipstick
    Demanding to be kissed

    Her smile
    Lights up her face
    Completing her loveliness

    I rush to be with her
    Must get there safe

    So I can look
    In Her Eyes

    Again I am safe

    Drop all my defenses
    Having them
    Creates boundaries and fences


    Into Her Eyes

    Again!

    And the smile
    Her allure.

    Is an attraction that is innocent, precious to me
    I feel safe and secure

    A five caret diamond expensive to acquire
    Its value can not measure
    Up to when I look
    In Her Eyes

    Treasure to hold
    It is not a dream
    In Her Eyes
    There is Love!
     
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    Beautiful write Hodee!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:dance:
     
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