Black Poetry : In Her Eyes

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  1. heartofantiger

    heartofantiger Member MEMBER

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    Thine eyes

    Forevermore thine eyes radiate with rippled tides.

    Title waves of love.

    Love for the deserving guy.

    Opened wide, eyes to the skies,
    she looks to her man
    with a sense of pride.

    Forevermore there is no divide,
    souls in union wad into the tide.

    This love they share comes from deep inside.
    Their feelings they never hide,
    they live in trust not in lies.

    Dreams of oceans and crescent moons,
    in passionate stares they dare to swoon.
    If loves and storm,
    what they share is a Typhon.

    He is her morning and she is his noon.
    Their is no night only brightness blooms.
    Blossoming flowers, no strife nor gloom.

    Forever in his eyes her heart’s consumed.
    They are two individual grains of sand that stand as a
    desert sand-doon.

    Forevermore, lovers eyes radiate with rippled tides.

    Forever more, Forever more, Forever more.

    He sees rippled tides of love in her eyes.

    Forever more, Forever more, Forever more.

    She sees rippled tides of love in his eyes.. :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome!!!!!

    :hearthis:
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace & unity love
    from above as i bless dis flow welcome u know
    to the family tyte scribe flow head on enjoy :welldone:

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    :welldone: Poem my brother and WELCOME home. I hope u make this place a regular trip on your daily travels and find everything you are looking for and need. tight drop of poetry!
     
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    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo. This was impressive. I felt it like crazy. :bullseye: :bullseye: :bullseye:
     
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    Very beautiful poem.
     
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    :welcome to destee poetry
    very well done wow i didnt know you wrote
    you share so much in chat
    this was awesome took me on a ride
    ok now...share some more!!!!!
    friday night is poetry thrown down
    hope to see you there
    do share your work

    Peace
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    This romantic peace is the joint!
     
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    Wow, so beautiful, makes me envision a romantic scene of the ocean at night. Flow on poet, and welcome to Destee.
     
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    heartofantiger Member MEMBER

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    Many thanks 2 all the dunn's and Dimes who showed me love on here. I thank you all.
     
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    So Nice

    yes...this is a lovely flow
    and i do love the water
    wow...the feeling of the tide
    builded your poem the
    reflection
    in her eyes..wonderful :)
    this part here really like wow and more
    Welcome to the Family
    enjoying your flowwwwwwwwwww
     
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