Black Poetry : IN HELL WITH PAYBACK AND PAIN

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U hurt me and left pain inside
    so now u want to apologize
    and then u started to realize that i am now dead
    with a brain that is dreaded
    so u have read my thoughts that i have written in my diary
    and u know sum of those sentences put u in misery
    u can no longer treasure me,but u can sho'll sparish with me
    so many things u said and did paid my way to death, so now
    I lay, what now do u have to say?............SORRY!...?
    but should of been sorry and worried back than,so y such late notice?
    u know thay always say 2 u betta be careful what u say to peopl
    not alone with what u do to people! well I guess u learned half
    but im bout to teach u whole,I was alwayz weak minded,but now
    im speak minded
    jus becuz i am in hell doesn't mean i aint gonna tell u how i felt!
    YEA! DATZ RIGHT IMA F**K WITH YO MIND!
    im a tell u how visisons of u made my eyez bleed
    ima tell u how u stop me as a seed to feed
    BOI U BESTA BELIEVE!
    i SAY ITS TIME TO LIVE UR CRIMES! so ima take u back on
    that recent day
    it was sunday a night be4 monday i was in the back of ur hundia!
    hands tied,crying,but slowly dieing,u had my heart racing without pacing
    when u lifed up the trunk, i cud tell u were drunk
    u laugh with excitement cuz
    u saw fear in my eyes, but now i can recite!
    u pulled me out, then threw me down,so i found myself on the ground,
    i tried to move
    GOD KNOWS I DIDNT WANT TO GROVE! BUT U DIDNT CARE!
    there was something that u wanted to share,so u tore my clothes off,
    and took my virginity,and used it in ur own humanity,
    After that i was full with bloody tears
    ashame to look at my own body becuz u took advantage, and manage to leave scars of ur name written all over me
    LOOK AT WHAT U DONE TO ME!
    SO THIS IS WHAT I BECAME TO BE!
    A SISTAH BURNING IN HELL AS MY FIRE BURNS WITH STRONG DESIRE TO GET BACK AT CHU!

    so here is when i start f**king with yo mind...lol, ima put u in my place, so rewind and start from the beginning
    i am u and u are me
    i am the one doing things to u that u wouldnt like,
    stuff so bad that u might turn into a dike, so u start to scream the song of terror
    jus like i did,but i forbidd u of tryin to get even with me
    so now u r rape,and ur mind will tape the bad mermory of me raping u! so i ask,how does it feel?
    when u have a taste of ur own venom medicine? YEA..THATZ RIGHT, IT HURTS LIKE A MUTHAFUCKA!!!
    SO Y DID U DO IT 2 ME WHEN U KNEW IT WAS GONNA COME BACK ON U?
    so dont rewind,jus keep in mind, that i am dead becuz of u
    u the one who lead me TO SUICIDE! BUT IT IS U WHO DECIDED TO SLEEP, SO THAT IS HOW I GOT IN YO HEAD!!! ........LOL


    DEDICATED TO PLP THAT HAVE BEEN RAP, AND 2 THE PLP THAT FEEL GUILT ABOUT A DEAD SOUL THAT THEY HAVE RAP, CUZ WUT GOES AROUND ,WILL CUM AROUND, SO BE CAREFUL WITH WUT U DO! (C)COPYWRITE
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya inner anger and pain of what take place in our society
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all i can say is whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. this was full of emotions sis. flo on , flo on.:welldone:
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STANK U MY BRATHA RICH 4 SHOWIN ME SUM LUV

    STANK U NEVAR 4 SHOWIN ME SUM LUV AZ WELL

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    Rage against the machine!!!!!!! Vent GA, let that energy loose, get hyphy on em' Cool script potna! Flow on
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stankz u mz spicy 4 showin a sista sum luv, and i will get hyphy on em ..lol..

    blackluv and bp
     
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    most welcome sis.......all love fo real
    flow on poetess of the week !!
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u my black bratha rich (koolaid smiling)

    blackluv and bp
     
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