Black Poetry : In Fall We Lust

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  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Black leathers
    and black
    "woolies"
    and we
    were

    ~ready

    to stroll
    through
    a world that
    looked
    like
    a spilled bowl
    of

    fruit-TEE

    pebbles...

    Others smiled at our passing...
    but
    we were only

    ~passing

    masquerading
    L O V E

    Only close
    "like dat"
    when
    on our way
    to
    her place
    or
    mine...

    If My Joynt
    wasn't Hard
    and Her Spot
    wasn't Hot
    then there
    wasnt
    no reason
    for US
    to be

    ~meeting
    ...clinging...
    rub-bing

    ....reaching.

    In lust...

    In
    Fall gusts...
    no trust
    NO
    knowing
    "one another's mind's"
    only
    physical times
    followed by
    hasty
    getaways

    and...possible-

    "**** ! Why you sweatin' me ..! - ...............".Days "

    ~After
    some time

    WE

    simply
    became

    friends.....

    we see each other

    NOW

    ~and

    grin....



    ....'cause now we know L O V E

    so remain




    ~good friends.







    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsyman

    You speak of the experiences of many....

    I'm totally diggin the way you broke this down; it's real.

    thank you, my eloquent bruva!

    a
     
  3. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~A....Cindy

    Thanks for peepin this one Alyce and Cindy...No doubt this one just fell out ...experience has a way of influencing....gravity. :cool:

    peace thanks 4 the read az always you 2

    g-maN
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the array of emotions

    these words give is unreal...
    and you end it on such a sweet note...

    K
     
  5. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    KITANA

    YOUR COMPLIMENTS encourage...uplift..and make me smile.

    thas peace

    g-man
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy

    What a way to express the things that many of us have experienced before in those "SILENT AGREEMENTS"... reminds me of that poem that I wrote - entitled just that!

    You definitely have a way of evoking thoughts, my sweet~

    Thanks for bringin' this out!


    One :heart:
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    G-Man.


    my... my... my... hmmmm... :)

    now, you know that i'm always feelin'
    & followin' your flow.... so, you won't
    be at all surprised when in tell you that
    the Sun is Shynin' all ova dis one! :)

    Thank You for the journey! :wink:

    OneLuv.
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!

    U SHO MUCH LOVE IN THIS ONE
    I CAN'T GET ENOUGH
    MO! MO! MO!...............:toast: :D
     
  9. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poets !!

    N2...GA....RICH,

    thanks 4 the L O V E on this one...as Fall approaches I am remembering the past more and more everyday..thanks 4 riding with me.

    peace and much love
    g-man
     
  10. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YES!!

    I loved this one poet..you flowed September

    And always as I read...I saw love....

    *FALLing*

    :love:
     
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