Black Poetry : IN~EX~TINGUISH~ABLE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Aug 31, 2007.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I connot behold u
    without emotions
    thy soul covers da thoughts
    wit a feverish lure
    my heart
    still answers to your callin
    of voice in da windz
    as my blood
    boils in my veins
    at da tappin
    of your footsteps

    My loveth for u is deathless
    and yet my eyez see only u
    in da image of my loveth
    ur inextinguishable beyond me
    da pasion of fire is a lasting blaze
    burning inside me
    I defy u to forget me utterly
    when all else has forsaken thee
    i shall creep forth and die in thin arms
    my love unconditional
    where we go into our slumber
    of morrowz unchange handz

    So my Queen sacrifice
    a little bit of thy self
    and i'll sacrifice my all unto u openly
    forth i cryed to think of such
    where my all is pitted unconditional
    for i my beloved queen
    fine u inextinguishable
     
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    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you wrote this one. Wow, "deathless love", it's soooo existent.
     
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    I Love the way ALL your works flow....
    I always leave "thinking" you were talking directly to M.E. and
    "feeling" oh so warm and fuzzy and generally 'good' or joyous
    and I'm then motivated to "Do" somethings...
    I walk away with tons of "sugar in my bowl" (Nina Simone) ready to "fix things up so I can go"..

    Your words drip with sweetness, that "deathless love" which keeps my fiyah burning...

    :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes love is just like that. The passion and fire in this piece is inextinguishable.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    And i thank u truely Phenomenon

    What one see and think is just that for i am humble to be able to enter
    your prime space and time thank u truetothecause for the warmth and
    support u give me and u know when they are direct at u .......smile

    Like ya self watz when it become inextinguishable then it's deep can't u just feel it
    thank u so dearly as always for that lovin support honey
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:

    I'm so luvn' this scribe....
    It's always so good to read your poetic
    verse. Missed Ya!!!!!!!!:blowkiss: :blowkiss:


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Likewise and thank u so kindly sista 4EVERLUV
     
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    Whoa ...do we need a hose up in here? It sounds like ya soul is on fire.
    I just love the fire, yet gentle touch ...^5
     
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    Queent just might need some water but not sure if it would put da
    flames out for what is and divine is so inextinguishable only thy heart
    holds such fire water only brings more passion ! .....lol
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang poet

    sang that anthem

    man

    this was that real poet

    real nice tribute