Black Poetry : in denial...?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Jul 7, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i’m sitting here trying
    in vain… to blame it
    on the rain or the wine
    or even on the tyme
    (cause it is getting late)
    but… my mind won’t let
    me rest… until i find
    some thing to adequately define
    the way you make me feel…
    my heart & my friends
    think they know the deal…
    but they are not making any
    sense… i mean... ****!
    i am not in love…
    at least i’m not trying to be
    you see… this is just a case
    of infat(you)ation… not
    divine amalgamation…
    ryght?… **** ryght!
    & in spite of how my soul
    takes flyght & my world
    converts to bryght when you’re
    within my syght…
    I am NOT in love!
    & regardless of how i feel like
    i’m floating on air & that i don’t
    ever dare let you go… when thoughts
    of you softly trace my mental…
    i’ll keep telling myself…
    I AM NOT IN LOVE!!

    (& Maybe One Day I’ll Believe It)



    ©SunShyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    Keep on shyning on a brother okay? this is nice queen. LOVE is what YOU do...fo' real.

    (say what you want you's in LOVE)

    verb
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "i'm not in love it's just some kind of thang i'm goin' through, goin' through, and it's not infactuation, aint' nothin' goin' on tween me and you..." mary j. gurl, this piece heyah took me back to my fave song by her. this piece, sweet sunshyne, is really tyght! i'm lovin' it, ma dear friend! but, ofcourse, you already know, gurl.

    ~~~chaptersoflove~~~
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    Go'on gurl and break it all the way

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    I simply love it!

    One.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'M NOT TRYING TO BE IN LOVED

    BUT ITS LIKE THAT COZ U MESMERIZE ME
    IN DES WAY AS I WATCH U SWAY BUT.....
    I'M NOT IN LOVE WIT YA CURVES
    NO NOT ME ITS NOT A WE BUT.......U KNOW US
    BE BY THE GARDEN NOT TO LOVE BUT ****!
    WE LOVE ANYWAY.........

    SUNSHYNE SOME TYME WE TRY HARD NOT TO
    FALL IN LOVE BUT IT HAPPENS ANYWAY
    SEE OUR HEARTS CAN GET OUT OF CONTROL
    AND BEFORE U KNOW IT WE R IN LOVED.......
    BUT I'M NOT TRYING TO FALL IN LOVE
    BUT I LOVE U BOO!!
    YEAH! U...>>>>>>>IN YO RAYS OF LIGHT:heart: :love: :heart: :kiss:
     
  6. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HuH???....Did I do that??!!

    Yep Yep Yep!!( And at least U Know) :)
    Luv'd the flow Sunshyne!
    Jyntl
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb. you don't even have to ask! you have
    inexhaustible access to the rays of the SunShyne. :)

    Lister. i was listening to that song while i was
    writing this piece! :) glad you liked it... i'm running out
    of ways to say thanks to you for the constant love!

    N2. thanks for the read sis! i 'preciate cha!

    $$RICHNE$$. boy! you'd betta stop sayin you love
    me like dat... i'm gonna believe you one day! then you'll
    really be in trouble! :wink:

    JB. glad you liked da flow! & i guess you're ryght...
    knowin' is half the battle... ryght? :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    TROUBLE !!!

    WOW!!
    THAT'S MY NAME INDEED
    THE LOVE TROUBLE MAN
    MAKING A STAND TO TAKE
    YO HAND AND BE YA LOVERMAN!
    BELIEVE......:D :heart:
     
  9. Amun-Ra

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    Say it!

    Some times the only way to say iut is to say it like it is--Amun-Ra :cool:


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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    GA_

    GA_

    flowing the flow

    but i know you not it denial

    cause you all that

    from your So'ja
     
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