Black Poetry : IN CHAT ALONE

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  1. RETREAT05

    RETREAT05 New Member MEMBER

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    IN CHAT ALONE
    WERE YOUR VOICE IS READ
    DID NOT SEE BUT I KNOW
    YOU NODDED YOUR HEAD

    ALONG WITH LAUGHTER
    CAN SOME FEELINGS EVOLVE
    ANTICIPATION FORGONE
    IS MY HEART BEING ROBBED

    CHOOSE A FRIEND
    SPECIAL, UNIQUE,
    UNDERSTAND MY NEEDS
    FOR IN TEXT I AM WEAK

    NO NEED TO GOOGLE
    THE MEANING OF SURREAL
    TWO WORDS EMBEDDED
    ONE BEING SURE
    TWO BEING REAL

    WHISPER ACCEPTED
    CONVERSE WIDE OPEN
    SPEAKING TRUE WORDS
    ENOUGH WITH THE JOKING

    THE CONTEXT OF OUR BEING HERE
    NO ONE CAN JUDGE
    IN CHAT ALONE
    LET US NOT HOLD A GRUDGE

    WITH YOUR WORDS SWEEP MY MIND
    YOU ARE PEACE IN MY SOUL
    LEAVE NOT THE MICROPHONE
    I WILL HAVE NO ONE TO HOLD

    ARE YOU STILL THERE
    ARE YOU OFF IN THE LOFT

    ALONE I WILL WAIT
    THOUGH YOU WILL NOT SEE
    SIGN IN BUT INVISIBLE
    ARE U QQ FOR ME

    I'LL PLAY YOUR SONG
    CAN READ ME A POEM
    ALONE IN HERE
    SAFE, COZY, WARM

    JAZZ IN THE BACKGROUND
    SOUNDS SOFT BUT SO STRONG
    EMOTIONS UNDERSTOOD
    BUT NOT ACTED ON

    SOOTHED ONCE AGAIN
    BY YOUR VOICE ALONE
    MUST SIGN OUT NOW
    BUT I AM NEVER GONE


    RETREAT05

     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    ouuuuuuuuuu Brother RETREAT ... you said you were gonna share a poem ... WOW !!! :toast:

    This is GREAT !!!! :great: :great: :great:

    You had originally posted this poetry in another forum, but i moved it to the poetry forum for you!

    Thank You for Sharing ... Nice Nice Nice !!!! :bowdown:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could not help but to respond to this one!!

    You are never alone when you are in chat! LOL

    Great piece Poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was awesomely done
    Welcome to destee.com
    happy you here to share poeticly , flow on
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    your first

    very innovative spur of the moment like with the chat mixed in with love


    peace
     
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    ROFL @ sister LD lolll

    Aint that the truth sistah lol

    Great write Retreat :) You gave words to the room for words :)
     
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    Brother RETREAT05,
    Great poem, great flow
    You brought it on and made it glow.
    Your emotions were thoughtful and clear.
    Many times words can make folk seem so near.
    I look forward to your next inspiration.

    Love & Blessings,
    Drea
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a wonderful read, you captured that special chat flavor so well. Welcome to Destee.com brother. Looking forward to reading more from ya.
     
  9. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    retreat - You can only talk the talk when you've walked the walked. And I think you did it good here. HH
     
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    WHOA! I Think I want to be the innocent bystander!!!!! THis Was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
    GREAT Flow RETREAT...but be foretold, As long as I am here and I see your name on the board, you won't be alone anymore...cuz I gotta see this!!!!
    LOL
    FLOW ON!!!
     
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