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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Oct 29, 2004.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remember the "train" that left yesterday?
    in case you didn't know...I was on it.
    ~*~
    this letter will reach you, in a day or two,
    yes, my mind is made up, to be free of you.
    ~*~
    I sold my heart, on the day I parted,
    but who would buy something...that's broken hearted?
    ~*~
    And that's not all, as I walked out the door,
    I cried for you ...like never before.
    ~*~
    I cried for the love, that you could've had,
    and I cried for the fact, that it didn't last.
    ~*~
    I cried because, you lost a good "Queen"...
    and the purity in me...no other's have seen.
    ~*~
    I could have loved you forever, if we rode the same track,
    but you insisted on "holding and pulling" me back.
    ~*~
    It took many years, to build what we had,
    you crumbled my "Queen-dom"...that's so **** sad.
    ~*~
    But my tears dried up...and my head is on straight,
    I'm glad I pulled out, before it's too late.
    ~*~
    Yes, I'm sitting here riding...got a long ways to go,
    where I'll end up ...you'll never know.
    ~*~
    cause all good things, must come to an end,
    and I'll drop you a line ...every now and then.
    :bye:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wheeew i know about this letter i have written and written this a thousand times..very heartfelt and it was soul deep as well nicely posed

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt i've written this out time after time
    very well heard and done flow on write it ....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such sadness in this flow, the ache that is conveyed is strongly felt. But life does move on and sometimes it's best to just move on with it. Well written flow.
     
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    I luv

    ur writing.......
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW SIs A SLAMDOr real....A Slam to The Heart and To the pen!!!!!!

    Wow
    Decisions can onlyy be for the Better when it's doing whats best for the heart
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes baby girl ...I put my heart in protective custody, locked it up and threw away the key.
    thanks for the luv
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    HA!

    Well, four snaps in "Z" formation and a neck roll! LOL!

    Loved this, Q. I wrote something similar to this myself.

    This was :terrific:
    ----> Loved that!
     
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