Black Poetry : in bittersweet memory

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  1. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    so soft to the touch
    milk chocolate sweet
    still more addictive
    than hershey's
    stronger aphrodisiac
    than vanilla
    and oysters together
    caramel color
    butter pecan - either way -
    have me crazy
    contemplating -
    ooooh - our bubble bath
    in candle light
    eyes deep like an ocean
    to drown in
    luscious lips
    have me delirious
    like a drug
    can't live without
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi bahati, :wave:

    This is a wonderfully written piece. Very descriptive. I like it alot!!

    You are so right, love is like a drug that we cannot do without!!

    Much peace to you!!

    Welcome to the family!! I look forward to reading more of your work!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know someone wit lips like that...jus yummy :) Glad I went through the files to find this one :)
     
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    nice scribe :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow ........taste lips
     
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    Is there a day without doubt?
    is there a night without wondering what if? ...
    Is there another road I was supposed to take.....
    Is there love enough to find a place in your arms again.....
    baited breath, lingering taste, tear stained pillows and sleepless nights..
    and the constant connection to you in my soul
    two lives entwined thousands of miles apart
    but ever present
    one breath...
    one heart..
    one pain..
     
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