Black Poetry : in bed, under the covers, between the sheets...without you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hadassah, May 6, 2001.

  1. hadassah

    hadassah Active Member MEMBER

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    i can't let you
    molest me in my sleep
    any longer

    you catch me unaware
    and i'm not wise
    until your hands
    are groping
    between...

    and i open my eyes

    & see the looks
    of lust and hunger
    in your stare

    i feel your heat
    and wonder
    why i still care

    so wanting us to find
    what we both seek

    i can't take it
    and my flesh is weak

    but you wait until
    i slumber deep
    to sex my soul
    interrupt my sleep

    my mind is weary now,
    these thoughts
    will keep....

    hadassah
     
  2. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ****!

    this one is plenty deep, hadassah!

    DAYUM!

    thanks for sharing

    mojo
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    you are awesome!

    wow !!!

    such an honor to have your work here!

    thank you for this

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heatwave between da sheets wow!!
     
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    Yall know what...

    I went back in the archives, and was reading some past works.. and I swear.. this poem did not recieve the regonitions it deserve.. so.. for a second time around yall.. this poem was deep.. we all have had that one person, when there relationship was rocky.. and they felt better waking you from your peaceful dreams (about how things should be) and you forget.. so u surrender to the late night love session. :hearts4:
     
  6. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I mean sh*t

    You really did put it out there
    but telling the truth with it is essential
    and you certainly told the truth
    Passion all up in this one
    Keep doin what you do
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love and justice prevails,

    Thanks for bringing this back. :kiss2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still hot and sweet , juicy and divine
     
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