Quiet Poetry Lounge : In all This Beauty I think of You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Mar 3, 2004.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    standing at the edge of beauty
    with so many thoughts running wild
    one deep breathe and all clears my mind
    so, why am i amazed its you i find
    buried deep inside frozen in time
    these thoughts of how you loved me
    like a friend instead of a lover
    i pushed and pulled wanting your cover
    why was i always asking for more
    whenever i needed, there you were
    friends forever was always said
    cliche as it is, you always hit me in the head
    all i wanted was for it to never end
    and i made you go away
    abolished your calls, selfishly spoiled
    i felt like all the effort was in vain
    but whenever one of our lives rain
    the others shelter is the only ones we know
    trust is not easy for either of us
    you were right, friends now lovers in the past
    our friendship is so pure it has to last.
    Always thinking about you.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess there are just some people that we can't get out of our mind. This was a lovely scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful flow
    what a heart holds is untouched
     
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    I see...

    In all this beauty...your beauty I see

    Like $$RICH$$ this is a beautiful floE
     
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    Oh...Sister

    I felt this soooo deeply...

    We have definitely traveled...some similar
    depth of emotion...

    This was heart wrenching.../
    the last line was the clincher

    Feeling it...
     
  6. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for all of your responses, they always mean so much to me in this sharing process I am still fairly new at.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    such a wonderful poet
    wonderful imagergy
    "lives rain" ..so many ways to say that...
    nice...
     
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