Black Poetry : In a Spiders Web

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  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IN A SPIDERS WEB

    I came I saw and she Macked
    As my jeans felt kind of packed
    Then she unzipped my big awesome fly
    Had no reason to ask questions why
    Then she threw her spider pannies on me
    And suggested that I get down and love thee

    Confessed that I was a virgin
    Because I never did a 69
    She said follow me and it will be just fine
    Although I was born in that year
    Its something that I always feared

    Don’t be afraid she said
    I thought my love was dead
    Just pretend she was a Georgia peach
    I went slow for the lessons she teach
    Then came the breach
    I went downtown for some more dinner
    Then fooled around with my fingers

    Drink up pretend its spiked cider
    The love juice of this black spider

    I ate my plate completely dry
    Like a good fly
    Spider hairs all in my mouth
    Now I know what its all about

    Help me Help me
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was too cute....

    Dosen’t sound like you need help to me

    Looks like you sealed the deal

    From that spider kneel

    You went down for the kill

    Got you a tasty meal

    filled with thrills

    69 was a fine year

    but 68 has a better taste

    Now that you’ve had a spider

    How bout graduating to

    some real bait
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need another degree
     
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    tyte drop look like u got it covered
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was quite the crafty sensual romp poet. My, my...
     
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    based on the peice, sounded like a very delightful experience
    thanks for sharing
     
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    Hi AACOOLDRE
    I love how you use the web of the spiders
    To weave a flow of sensual delight
    Very nice! :)

    Peace & Love