Black Poetry : In a Room full of Nothing (the Repost)

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Empty Bed
    Quiet Phone
    Cold oven
    She's home all alone.

    No breeze.
    No sneeze.
    Puleeeeeeeeeeze!
    That man is gone!

    There she sits in her
    room all alone.
    A room full of nothing
    and a heart filled with
    less.

    A room full of nothing
    can leave an ugly mess.
    Naked hangers on his side
    of the closet.
    You wondering
    where and when
    you had lost it

    This room used to jump with
    passion and fire when we
    were the object of each
    other's desire.

    The same size bed that much
    is true. It just somehow seems
    much bigger cause it's not
    holding you.
    Umph! umph! umph!
    We used to be something
    but what we got now is a
    room full of nothing...
    BJS(C)2003:confused: :confused: :confused:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u know dis took me back to when i thought i had the world
    and when i woke up i had nothing but room and air............

    Nice flow u make a mind vision thangz !
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    msluciousb

    ****...you make me want to come over and console you. :D

    ...very nice. ;) :toast:
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright Monetary!

    I am weak............:eek: :x: :x: and vulnerable....So don't tease a starving woman.

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great peace.
    I could feel the emotion flowin outta this one and see the words b4 my eyes.

    *Emma*
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man u got me ova here

    thinkin bout the time me and my boyfriend had broke up for a week :D I couldn't take it chile!!!!!!!!




    One
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chile it will be alright after while!

    Now we can do one or two things we can have a pity party with Haagen daaz and all, or we can have a Pretty party and look in the mirror and claim our beauty and realize that if the *****'s gone he was supposed to be. You will survive, hey hey!
    "First I was afraid, I was petrified, thinking I would never live to have you by my side..."!(Gloria Gaynor) "I will survive!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    all i can say is

    WOW

    what a piece

    i love it MSB


    PEACE
    DSS
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Soja!

    I am doing my thang and learning how to use even the pain to create something that is ultimately beautiful, I fell in love and he fell out...that's what life is all about!
    Thanks for reading!
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    I'm diggin this Mslb. Keep it up!
     
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