Black Poetry : In A Place...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, May 14, 2003.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In a place like no other
    Where I'm depending on my brother
    Just a helping hand
    I understand where I am
    And listening to the echos of your heart
    The sudden cries
    The mysterious art
    Your allure
    Drives me crazy
    If you only knew
    How you fazed me
    I'm lost in a moment
    With out a clue
    And now I'm dazed
    Off my memories of you
    I'm dazed with sure delight
    And your presence is calm and cool
    In a place
    Just feeling you
    Just feeling you
    In a place...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da love one so pose is the feeling
    untouched .....keep flowin' storm
     
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    Beautiful Desert! JUST FEELIN YOU IN THIS PLACE. Love your scribes.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Very exquisite. You grasp the power of ...just bein in the presence of a woman and I love it
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sounds like the place to be!
    Loved this flow, Poet!
     
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