Black Poetry : In a Hush....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She wanted him to
    know her name not
    What’s between her thighs
    Getting high was his game
    And he destroy her dreams…
    He had no shame…
    Playin and playin
    Never really listenin
    Just do what he always do
    Not know he had lost
    What loved him true….
    He took a book and didn’t read
    foolin around
    flirtin
    trippin
    as he claimed he loved her
    actin as if he was god sent….
    She walk out the door
    Wit out a word….
    But in a hush she said good bye….
    One day you will miss
    What you had……she whisper
    in a hush she
    cried out her tears as she closed
    The door..to a dream
    she thought was real
    But full of games and betrayal…..
    In hush she
    left the pain behind…….
    And one day she will…
    find that true
    love that awaits her…
    the funny thing is…..
    he didn’t notice she was real….
    In a hush….good bye and
    she closed the chapter

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2004
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Actions speak so much louder than words ever could.

    Nice piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Humph, sounds like he wasn't worth her time, just a playa at heart. Emotive drop here.
     
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    I lived this

    I walked out some years back. Hadn't been treated well at all - that's an understatement. I saw her at a basketball game last summer and well.......I think she knows now what she lost.

    Feelin this one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was well felt indeed action is very clear
    tyte drop
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for the love

    indeed ACTIONS speak much louder....

    love and Peace to yall
    who replied......Angel
     
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