Black Poetry : In a Hole

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaneak, Nov 12, 2003.

  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you weren't expecting it...
    didn't know how to get over it...
    sure couldn't go over it...
    And you got stuck in a hole...

    you know..
    when the new gets old...
    when the hot gets cold...
    and the uncertainty starts to show...
    Looks like you're getting deeper in that hole...

    Not sure of what to let go...
    Steady as your life unfolds...
    Your burdens are your only hold...
    Yet you still dig deeper into that hole...

    Stand tall... take a chance...
    Be Bold...
    Make a stance...
    Pull yourself out dhat hole...

    It covers you
    smothers you...
    will feed off of you
    take the wind out of you...
    No motivation...
    Just the sad and blue...
    Sometimes you just gotta let go...
    In order to uplift yourself...
    Out of the hole...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey i am feelin this right here..
    good drop...
    hope to read more of you
    peace:angel1:
     
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    The Hole Truth

    True... you got it goin' on, "In A Hole", is happening! :star:
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone

    Thanks... just some motivation for me and anyone else who needs it..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    dis was tyte ya on point here
     
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    yes
    let it go
    let the flow
    pour
    feeling you on this
    Peace
     
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    gotta get out dat hole
    i aint a mole
    can't be dig'n in dirt
    gotta take control
    and get outta dis hole...


    this was tyte...
    keep'n flow'n
    peace
    khasm
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    word, that last line is especially the truth, nice piece.
     
  9. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Holes surround me

    i fall in holes all the time,
    but my rhymes get me out,
    but when i fall i lose my mind,
    and lose sense of what the fall was all about................(tyte flow)(feelin' it)
     
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    you gotta have guts to get outta the rut

    tyte flow!