Black Poetry : In 4 years, this was my most intense romance

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our First Kiss



    Candlelite flickers
    Mind triggered by
    Thoughts of kissing
    You

    As God cries tears of
    Rain
    Praying this moment won't be in
    Vain I…
    Turn down the heat
    Notice beads
    Upon his forehead

    Gently, yet with sensual intensity I…
    Wipe them away I
    Want him to stay but can't vocalize
    Can he feel the flame ignited between my
    Thighs
    As
    I
    Gaze deeply into his
    Eyes
    In~
    Viting
    Eyes that
    Mesmerize I'm…
    Diggin his vibe

    Somewhat shy
    Feelin intimidated I
    Stare as you
    Step across my threshold

    I'm nervous
    Feelin butterflies as you
    Approach
    Sending chills up my spine
    Moment hot and spicy
    Like…Indian cuisine

    Throbbing down there as
    You In~
    Crease the friction on
    My leg bare
    Unable to withstand the intensity and
    Anticipation I…
    Cup your face in my hands and
    Connect
    Lip2lip
    Tongue2tongue
    Tasting sweet juices
    Savoring the flavor as
    Passion unfolds
    Body no longer cold

    As lips unlock I stare into
    His deep brown eyes feeling
    Somewhat mellow and say to myself,

    Dayum, this is one "hella fella!"



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  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bravo Bravo

    Oooooh weee sista.... This was bomb diggity fa sho... Jeez girlfriend, all this eroticism got me feel'n kinda funny inside.... I should've known Bishop was up to something when he suggested this.....lol

    8th!
     
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    And Ya Know This!!!!

    WoW Afri,

    Wishin' I was that "hella fella" right about now!!! :wink:

    Diggin' ya vibe and ya mental most def!!!

    Where ya hiding?

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot:

    i hope there's a fire truck on standby for what's about to pop off in this room

    now you know you came with the heat on this one...

    tight scribe...

    ***going to see what's so funny in 8th :lol: ***
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's what I'm talkin' about...

    I always say ain't nothing like that raw sensuality. You ripped it on this one (but, then again, when don't you rip it?). You wreakin' havoc with joints like this. Keep it up, mama...
     
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    Afri.....I'm envying that brother right about now.....WOOOWEEEEE!!! :hot:


    Hey 8th...A little eroticism never hurt anyone....oh and by the way...Yeah you should have known....:wink:
     
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    Afri

    your writing is so pretty~sweet~ you have such a delicate pen stroke...that I can appreciate. You paint the scenes so vividly and take the reader right to the spot!

    Oh yeah my sustah, your ink is HOT! :hot:

    Thank you,

    A
     
  8. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th

    Thanks sis!! Now as for you and this funny feelin, well, you might want to watch your back cause someone's one their way to "help" you!LOL;)
     
  9. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ sweetie...

    You know I'm mos def diggin ya vibe too right???;) I think of this most intense moment often and replay it in my mind...over and over again!!

    BTW...I'm ot hiding, just waiting to be found.:)





    dnommo~~

    As long as I'm not accused of igniting the flames!!!lol
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smiling

    MapleX and Alyce~~
    Just trying to keep it as real and as simple as possible! I look up to you two!!!:)


    Bishop~~
    You leave me speechless, attempting to maintain composure while smiling so hard my cheeks hurt!!;)

    thank you love!!
     
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