Black Poetry : improv......wat would they say if they could speak....

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    happiness
    sadness
    dancing
    side by side
    together
    if only they were friends

    underdstanding
    is understanding that
    patience overcomes in the end

    peace imagine
    imagining its truths
    wat it would be like
    if we aint have haters like u

    pains walking by
    whispering in loves ear
    telling it al the nasty lies it shoudnt
    hear
    leading the heart astray
    to start another lonely day

    mankind seems so found
    that they have lost themselves
    in themselves
    and
    those around
    found that we see each other so well
    too well to look past wat
    we found
    they eyez
    they r really double sided... but wit only one way out
    the light travels
    and the choice is urs
    urs....decide...

    as the days gently embrace the nigts coolness
    i slide into my bed
    thinking wat peace would have
    said... to war
    and love to me...
    and truth to knowledge....
    and understanding....
    wat would they tell mankind
    if they could speak...
    how would a conversation between them be.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very thinkable scribe got me wondering too
    love the flow POET OF THE WEEK keep it coming
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    "pains walking by, whispering in loves ear"
    love that line...
    congrats again poet of the week...keep flowing...
     
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    If good and evil held hands, if day spoke to night...I loved the back and forth, positive and negatives blending together in possiblities here. I loved this, flow on poet of the week....whew....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moving this one back up. I thought it was an awesome flow.
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    what would they say?
    interesting question and tyte flow...
    go head on poet of the week....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the concept behind this one sista...giving the inanimate animation and letting the feelings LIVE...:read: i see i see :read: :)
    are you SURE you dont wanna READ this live in chat on the mic :look: :)
     
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