Black Poetry : Improper Advances

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IMPROPER ADVANCES
    WHEN ALL A SISTA DOES IS DANCES
    SOME MAY SAY SHE PRANCES
    BUT THAT'S JUST HOW SHE DANCES
    PROUD AND FREE SO HAPPY JUST TO
    BE
    THEN ALONG COMES SOME FOOL
    WITH HIS HAND ON HIS TOOL
    AND ALL OF HIS BLOOD RUSHING
    FROM HIS GREY MATTER
    REACHING AND PAWING, SCRAPIN
    AND CLAWIN
    AND TRYIN TO TAKE OFF THE LIL
    YA ALREADY BEAR

    WHERE IS THE BOUNCER, HOW DARE
    THIS FOOL, THINK I AM SOMETHING
    THAT HE CAN JUST USE.
    OH, I PUT MYSELF OUT THERE.....
    ****, IF I HEAR THAT AGAIN I SWEAR!
    NOW HE HAS HIS HAND IN MY HAIR.....
    TRYING TO TAKE MY LIPS DOWN THERE
    I KNOW JUST WHAT TO DO
    AND HE WON'T GRAB NOBODY ELSE
    WHEN I AM THROUGH
    IMPROPER ADVANCES, NO SECOND
    CHANCES, I SAID DON'T TOUCH
    THIS IS TOO **** MUCH.....
    "JUST TAKE A BITE OUT OF CRIME"!

    BJS(c)2001
    *FICTIONALIZED CHARACTERIZATION OF AN ACTUAL ACCOUNT,
    THE WRITER IS NOT THE SUBJECT! (jEEZ!)
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said poetess

    i bet he won't try that **** again
    bite out of crime!!
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm...

    ...totally with $$RICH$$.
    It's highly doubtful, he'd
    have made a second advance.
    And if that isn't the best way
    for a lady to handle such a
    situation, I don't know what
    is. Thumbs up for this little
    piece of reality...:D
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok! Thanks Fellow Scribes!

    Always nice to know someone is reading ya, and feeling the
    vibe ya scribe!:D
     
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