Black Poetry : IMPERFECTIONS

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THEORIES VS. RELIGION
    FACTS VS. OPINIONS
    THE FREEDOM OF SPEECH HAS BROUGHT A WAR BETWEEN BELIEFS & CRITICISMS
    A DEBATE HAS BEEN LAID OUT WHY MEN SHOULD ONLY DATE WOMEN :nono:
    BUT NOBODY TALKS ABOUT WHY WE CHERISH THE COST OF SUV'S, HOUSES, AND LINEN :bowdown:
    WE ONLY BLAME EACHOTHER FOR A FAULT THAT EACH ONE OF US IS COMMITTING :argue:
    OR POINTING FINGERS @ A PERSON FOR ABOMINATIONS, BUT EACH ONE OF US IS SINNING
    WHO ARE WE TO SHAME ANOTHER FOR BELIEVING IN SOMETHING WE DONT UNDERSTAND
    PEOPLE BELIEVE WE'RE BUILDING CASTLES, BUT WE'RE ONLY SINKING IN THE SAND
    BECUZ HUMANITY DOESNT BELIEVE IN NATURAL CAUSES, SO THEY MAKE UP AN EXCUSE 'N' LINK IT TO MAN
    SO AS PEOPLE WE BARELY LISTEN, SO OUR FIRST INSTINCT IS TO DEMAND
    BUT HOW CAN WE BE LEADERS IF WE NEVER LEARN TO CRAWL B4 WE STAND
    THE WORLD WILL NEVER BE PERFECT, NOT BECUZ THERE ISNT FAITH, BUT BECUZ WE CANT... :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said and heard
     
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    OoOwee, I adore this :jumping: It is straightforward, raw and thrown down beautifully. This is a new side of you girl - the political tip - and I'm diggin it most def. :shades:
     
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    The world needs more than just an ounce of compassion, this was a deep write, keep flowing.
     
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    thanks yall, it was just a freestyle.
     
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    Volumes of truth told
    within this piece..
    Sister...I wish a
    quick return for
    you to drop
    some more of your
    fiyah on us...

    Powerful peace...
     
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