Black Poetry : IMPERFECTIONS

[poeticlyspeakin]

THEORIES VS. RELIGION
FACTS VS. OPINIONS
THE FREEDOM OF SPEECH HAS BROUGHT A WAR BETWEEN BELIEFS & CRITICISMS
A DEBATE HAS BEEN LAID OUT WHY MEN SHOULD ONLY DATE WOMEN
BUT NOBODY TALKS ABOUT WHY WE CHERISH THE COST OF SUV'S, HOUSES, AND LINEN
WE ONLY BLAME EACHOTHER FOR A FAULT THAT EACH ONE OF US IS COMMITTING
OR POINTING FINGERS @ A PERSON FOR ABOMINATIONS, BUT EACH ONE OF US IS SINNING
WHO ARE WE TO SHAME ANOTHER FOR BELIEVING IN SOMETHING WE DONT UNDERSTAND
PEOPLE BELIEVE WE'RE BUILDING CASTLES, BUT WE'RE ONLY SINKING IN THE SAND
BECUZ HUMANITY DOESNT BELIEVE IN NATURAL CAUSES, SO THEY MAKE UP AN EXCUSE 'N' LINK IT TO MAN
SO AS PEOPLE WE BARELY LISTEN, SO OUR FIRST INSTINCT IS TO DEMAND
BUT HOW CAN WE BE LEADERS IF WE NEVER LEARN TO CRAWL B4 WE STAND
THE WORLD WILL NEVER BE PERFECT, NOT BECUZ THERE ISNT FAITH, BUT BECUZ WE CANT...

 

[$$RICH$$]

well said and heard

 

[gempis]

OoOwee, I adore this It is straightforward, raw and thrown down beautifully. This is a new side of you girl - the political tip - and I'm diggin it most def. :shades:

 

[watzinaname]

The world needs more than just an ounce of compassion, this was a deep write, keep flowing.

 

[poeticlyspeakin]

thanks yall, it was just a freestyle.