Black Poetry : IMPERFECT PERFECTION

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  1. silentsiren

    silentsiren Member MEMBER

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    IMPERFECT PERFECTION

    In the mirror appears my reflection,
    Some say imperfect, I say Perfection.
    I wear what I want at my discretion,
    Not caring if others, look my direction.

    A woman of inner Beauty stares back at me,
    Cautioning others to look beneath.
    I am a woman who can be reached,
    Just as long as, you see me for me.

    I don’t think I am better than the rest.
    I am just among the many blessed.
    Feelings are what my heart digest.
    I encourage the spread of happiness.

    A person that tries to do what’s right,
    Against hostility, I’ll put up a fight.
    An Independent female, full of might.
    Thus, my personality takes flight.

    I am more than what meets the eyes
    I have morals as well as pride.
    I can see through phoniness, please realize.
    I am real, I am the ultimate prize.

    I have a keen sense of perception.
    Always making a good impression.
    Once again I wont fail to mention,
    You say imperfect, I say perfection.​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^5 to u on this. Inner beauty is ever lasting.
     
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    mochablaze Active Member MEMBER

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    I am really feelin' this poem because I can relate so much to it. much props.
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...

    Some don't take the effort 2 love them.

    It's nice that U do.
     
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    perfect drop.

    :deal: such a firm and bold post.. I loved every line. :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was on point well delivered
     
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    very nice drop indeed
    flow on......
     
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    this is beautiful
    that inner beauty
    Peace
     
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    silentsiren Member MEMBER

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    mzblkangel -, $$RICH$$, caramelpython, PositiveMindset, mochablaze, watzinaname ,
    I thank you all very much for your thoughts and words, I am happy that you all took the time to read this.
     
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    thanks for reading blue water.
     
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