Black Poetry : ...Imperfect Love...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Sep 21, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why do i always have to learn
    everything hard has to be earned?
    i used to think that love was perfect
    and now i see its so imperfect
    a perfect relationship doesn't exist
    used to be, and i was convinced
    my relationship never had any flaws
    just love abundantly by the law
    but lately its been so [email protected] hard
    like people are trying break us hard
    all these ex's tryin' to get my man back
    all these people tryin' to set me back
    used to think everything was easy
    used to go through life so breezy
    but now storms and rain have invaded
    leaving me and my man feelin' raided
    there is no such thing as perfect love
    that only comes from the God above
    love that a man and woman go through
    has its tests and trials and utmost blues
    but all these tests make us stronger
    enabling us to stay together longer
    as the winds blow and lightning flashes
    the trees whip causing painful backlashes
    raindrops tear throughout the black sky
    and thunder crashes down loudly nearby
    but after the storm the sun shines bright
    as we begin to make love all through the night
    this brings us closer than ever before
    then we rest, cry, and get ready for more...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed i feel u so on this
    love works in ways we don't
    understand
    a perfect relationship is myth
    but a real relationship sho pain , flaws & reasons
    flow on sistah
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich...things just haven't been goin my way lately...but i'm learning from these experiences and in the long run this will make me wiser...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes it will help u grow into the circle of love
    that have many twist & turns .....something nobody can teach
    we learn it as life go on .....the light will break through soon 4 u
    until my dear friend lean on me....!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :D rich ur so sweet :D
     
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    I am really feeling this. I think we've all been here
    a time or 2. But the wiser you get the wiser in love
    you will become and then happiness will be yours for the taking.
     
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    i feel you on this...
    you have great faith...
    love this
     
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    wow...
    you finna make me cry jus reading this...
    you have a beautiful love my friend
    Never let any one come between:):):):)
    you're in my prayers:kiss:
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the nice words poetic...
    glad u liked it mzblkangel...
    awww u know i don't wanna make u cry...thanks girl...
     
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    This is realism at its best. You love! it hurts! you do it again. This is nice.
     
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