Black Poetry : Imperfect Imperfections

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  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yay, my fourth poem shall now be posted, I'm lovin this site.



    IMPERFECT IMPERFECTIONS

    What's the matter, am I not pretty enough?
    Could I never make you smile?
    Did I not ever make you laugh,
    not even for a while?
    Did I never make you feel good,
    way deep down inside?
    Didn't you trust me?
    Did you always fear I'd lied?
    Did I not make you want to spend time with me,
    every single day?
    Didn't I prove I loved you,
    in every sort of way?
    Why did you not touch me
    and hold me close to you?
    Did you fear I'd hurt you?
    Or that my feelings were not true?
    Was I not good enough,
    to be known as your girl?
    Was I not successful enough,
    to be your whole world?
    Did I never kiss you right?
    Or was I not good in bed?
    Were you ashamed of me,
    because of something that I said?
    Did I never act right?
    Did I not play the little doll?
    Did I not share everything?
    Did I not give my heart and soul?
    What's the matter am I not pretty enough?
    Or is it, that you could never love?
    Me.



    Hope u like

    8/10/01
    *Emma*
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emma...

    Very nice flow!!!

    Keep 'em coming...


    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks GQ, nice to see you here :)


    *Emma*
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emma.


    ...i'm feelin' the questions! & in order to
    be brief... i'll just say that i really enjoyed
    the read!! your 4th piece... & you're doing
    a fantastic job, my dear!!

    write on Poet! :)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poetically ya vibe is felt within
    nice flow u scribe .....lovin it
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys I shall post a fifth tonight. :)
     
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