Black Poetry : immunity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Jan 21, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Immunity

    Ohhhhh.

    Another year

    Ohhh. Child

    I left the game
    To get an angle
    For we are searching for an angle

    See, many people look for an outlet
    Plugging themselves in places
    Normally they wouldn’t even be
    Many women lower their standards
    Not to be lonely
    Many men can’t find love in one woman
    Homie
    Ain’t no homies, can’t trust ******

    Cuz they ******
    The word seems to be just a word
    To us it is
    I heard a Asian dude call his homeboy a *****
    But he wouldn’t speak to me the same way
    We finally getting over callin each other dog
    But my generation is still inferior
    To the outlaw

    Sometimes, i feel like I’m better than some brothers
    Truth is
    I;m just confused as the next brother
    We all in incest cuz one family survived after 40 nights
    Of rain
    It must have been pain
    For abel to be slain
    Is it
    Jay z shot his brother
    I listen to him all the time
    I call a girl a *** before I know
    Her, now I love her
    I wonder why my words are so detrimental
    I immune to the effect of my words
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep
    flow it poet
    Serenity
    Blue:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very nice drop u pose a masterpiece
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sooo deep...i loved the way you wrote it and the message you were trying to convey. much love to you.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep drop
    flow on....
     
  6. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the reply everyone
    i been busy with school startin
    bout to turn 22 and im already making plans about vday
     
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