Black Poetry : Immaculate Conception

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  1. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Between these four walls
    protected from the elements
    two becomes one in order to
    create a third, an important fraction
    when all is complete, love is the word
    bearing the weight of the phrase
    that comes to mind, whenever we
    long for much needed quality time
    what GOD has ordained, let neither
    falsehoods, nor treachery tear asunder
    or else face the eminence of lightening
    and thunder. Hmmmm……
    I wonder; could this be the plan,
    Woman and man, energies mingling
    sweat and tears of joy, leaving our
    nerve endings tingling, or is this a dream
    Whatever the case, the scene is intense
    The ebbing tide, so immense
    I can’t stop, the thought of ending this now
    makes my heart drop……
    I try to open my eyes, a brief lapse of
    consciousness leaves me in awe
    of the absence of flaw in my lady
    Of all the gifts you gave me Lord;
    Thank you for this beautiful woman and
    the joy we shared in….creating our baby.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AFROSTOTLE this was sooooooo beautiful :)
    Someone is gon be so blessed if they have u as a father :)
     
  3. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww shucks, stop it! Thanks sista. That is truly a complement, considering the perfection and grace you display in your work.

    One love....................
     
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    ooooooooooohh this is sooo beautiful. your words and delivery was great, keep em comin, much love...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very smooth flowin'
    like dis here a lot keep the ink flowin'
     
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    this is sooo beautiful :)
     
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    awwwww, this was so sweet
    be still my beating heart

    JustE
     
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    word...this was tyte
    flipped me with da title
    but it does fit
    peace
    khasm
     
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    THis is nice, of course my favorite part is "let neither
    falsehoods, nor treachery tear asunder
    or else face the eminence of lightening
    and thunder. " brings chills, very nice.......
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THis is nice, of course my favorite part is "let neither
    falsehoods, nor treachery tear asunder
    or else face the eminence of lightening
    and thunder. " brings chills, very nice.......
     
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