Black Poetry : Imagining You....

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  1. LovNThySoul

    LovNThySoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Imagining You

    How can i imagine you, your style, your grace,
    My potential boo, your curves, your face

    How you react to my hands that caress your lines
    Or my lips that plan to slightly feel your symmetry in kind

    And I lead you to a wall as you have no clue
    Of what erotic little things i plan to do

    I continue an exploration of my lips on your skin
    Searching with them, hands, arms and neck with a crafty grin

    I seek only to have you play with my 4
    More i touch softly with lips that have you asking for more

    As my lips start to find, with lines ...so devine
    The curves of your spine that slope so sublime

    A turn is made by you of eyes so brown
    That makes me want to test you and go further down

    And show you that i can make your say some verbs and nouns
    That will never have you look and say words with the same sounds

    Show you another way of thinking of those ABCs
    As I make you loose yourself while between those knees

    Lift you up on that wall, and loose myself in pleasing you
    And you melt into almost a fall while feelin it too

    My mind wanders of imagining you, how you feel
    What you would do, how you would respond to the whole ordeal

    That my passion and sensuality constantly await
    And a promise that my play of 4 you'll never want to escape.
     
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    this was smooth.......imagining da beauty of it all.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a sensual flow of the imagination.
     
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    Thanks for the replies on these as well. I was hoping i wasn't getting to uh...adult rated but i went with it.

    I'd like to maybe add a part 2 to this one. We'll see. It's already in my head. Might put it out there.
     
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    very nice....it has a warming effect u can say

    just enjoying the flow
     
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    Hope the warmth lasts on a chilly fall night.
     
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    Very Nice. Flow with part two. Part one does get the imagination started.

    You reversed 4 play nice twist in the flow... turn it up! Don't hold back on part two.
     
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    yes, i to imagine you
    on all the things you would like to do

    as i let your mind roam free
    to have you thinking of me

    whether i'm the kind of girl your mama would like
    do i keep us mess love to fight

    do i have the curves of J-lo
    whether i'm a good girl or a H*e

    but then again i wanna know if you have strong features
    would you object if you know i'm a daughter of a preacher

    do you love the things life has to offer
    do you even care or bother

    to pick up the phone just to say hello
    are you my friend or foe

    but then again i would like to imagine your sensual touch
    as you let me steer the clutch

    you let me touch it, rub it to find its true shape
    to pull out all my fruits strawberries, and grape

    to let one burst in my mouth
    would you go south

    to see if everything as good as i say
    and how i'm anticipating for your tongue to play

    upon those pretty lips
    here's a tip

    i like chocolate on over me
    go to work have your way with thee

    cause i'm imagining you got me touching myself
    my A.T.L. brotha i ask to not fall deaf

    to the cries of a girl who in distress
    prove to me that the southern boyz are the best

    Imagining all what we hope and desire
    Until we meet again we'll be making love over a open fire

    From tha ga peach
    who keeping it nice and sweet
     
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    aww ...


    beautifull......





    i loved this calm imaginary peace.....








    i always have this when i feel ....
    alone or longing...
    ......

    keeps me away from doing stoopid things.....
    in the real world.....


    than i try to imagine.....
    my other half.......(i try not to imagine someone cause than i feel i am not honest because i can not create ...only god can bring together cause i want it to be real and gods will,but somhow this person just appears...and i cant help it and if it is not right the lord will make it dissapear eventualy )
    and how we would be and the things
    we would do ..
    if we find eachother...
    and be with eachother....
    somthimes i fall asleep by the beautifull images...















    thanks for sharing....








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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