Black Poetry : Imagine

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  1. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    Imagine this,
    me, an inamimant object
    awaiting the right touch
    her touch, which brings me to lofe
    for one specific pleasure
    her pleasure

    Imagine
    her body custom fitted to my liking
    from head to the very last toe
    from every dip to every curve
    her body, mine for the taking
    all mines

    Imagine
    her, vexed by my every touch
    perplexed by my gentle tongue
    building a roadmap to her soul
    my hands, mere tools shaped for her liking
    and only her liking

    Imagine
    two bodies coming together for a cause
    beautiful in its own way
    developed from deep within,
    two bodies wrapped,
    as one

    Imagine
    two coming together
    spiritually, mentally,
    amd now
    physically,

    Imagine that


    :hearts3:


    thought this up at about 2 o clock last nite
    need to go back over it and make changes but this will do for now
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely one has and deeply too
    this was da bomb ! awesome write
    to imagine in whewwwwwww!!
    flow on poet
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    image that ....this was sweet i enjoyed the read thank you for sharing....Angel
     
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    You being made for her, and her being made for you...yea, that's something to imagine alright, something wonderful.
     
  5. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Best friend the poetic growth is comin' on strong. This was a nice touch I didn't know you had all that in you. I see the beginning of something beautiful coming from you. Keep flowin I look forward to reading more from you.
     
  6. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    tyty best friend but you cantb go tellin anybody that im soft ok
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good structure. You gone open up some imaginations with this one. Smooth piece bru.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok best friend I won't tell everybody about your sensitive side.
    I promise your secret is safe with me ...
    that is until you make me mad.
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wuwiewowie....


    nice...







    this was nice and beautifull Poet..











    Love Auroraflower:heart:
     
  10. UrbanPoet

    UrbanPoet Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you I appreciate the feedback
     
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