Black Poetry : ..IMAGINE...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jul 14, 2003.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wrote this cuz some people have been judgin’ me instead of getting to know who I really am…and it hurts a lot…




    I have a small desire to take you on a trip
    I want you to see the fire of my pain, reminisced
    But if you don’t wanna go, I’ll understand your reason
    Just let me know, if you are tired my bein’…

    First imagine the unwanted pain of feeling like you’ve been decepted
    Imagine feeling so alone that you also feel somewhat unprotected
    Imagine that you are by yourself and you think there is no one to turn to
    Despite that fact that your family and friends forever stand behind you
    Imagine that a boulder has hit you to make you fall down extremely hard
    Imagine feeling betrayed my God, although you know that he’s in charge
    Close your eyes and picture a room, a cold hospital room
    Where you spend your days and nights and midnights filled with gloom
    Imagine all your dreams transforming from hope to shattered failure
    Imagine that your talent seems to sleep inside of failure
    Imagine cursing every living thing that seems healthy to you
    When you know that secretly some are hiding beneath the needed truth…

    Well...

    I just wanted to take you on a trip, to give you a glimpse of what I’m feeling
    And if you didn’t want to know it,then you can go on with you happy feeling’s
    Honestly I don’t give a d*mn, about the bad things said about me
    Cuz I have the love of God and my man, to forever and always surround me…
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed and may i add ya friendz of flow
    i really feel u here i too be judged
    but judge be not forth one can't judge thee..
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a deep and well felt poem golden one,
    i felt it deeply.

    thanks for sharing
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich:

    well i'm glad somebody understands this...i just hate the fact that some people are so ignorant that they don't realize the pain a person could be in, eventhough they may look, act, or seem normal and like everything is okay...it just frustrates me so much...and theres nothing i can do...but go back to what makes me feel alive...and thats writing...
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alot the_story :)
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovely.....loved it..

    i loved the end converdant and open..

    bless you beauty!

    much love liberty!
     
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    know matter what others may think, do you lovely, thats what really counts! Why do people who live in glass houses seem to be the first ones to throw the stones? Forget about them Gurl!
    You're alright in my books. Hold your head. God will hold your hand.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl, let me know who's been judgin you...I'll "takec care" of 'em lo!!! You're a beautiful person Lovely, inside n out!!!!!! tyte flow:)
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody!!!!:D...ur words uplifted me:)
     
  10. Locust

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    yes
    this exellent or may i say exxxxxxxxxxxxellent
    is the words of Mr. Burns...hehehe
    forget the hataz
    get the money your riche$$ then we can kick it
    aight
    one
     
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