Quiet Poetry Lounge : Imagine wit Me....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DIIMOND, Sep 27, 2002.

  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful waterfall stares deeply into my eyes, mesmerizing me with each passing wind and each breath I take. What a beautiful,
    benevolent site to behold... Imagine lying on a beach with black sand, imagine walking by black pearls instead of rocks. How wonderful it would be if you let your mind create the scene.
    Imagine coming across an amazing meadow with intoxicating flowers all around... visions of every color for miles and miles.... Enjoying the beautiful scenery and never wantng to lose your grip on this brain thang that has no limits, no boundaries, all
    power is in your hands as you relax and let your mind glide and flow on baby; flow on.........
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Whew! Now THIS is the epitome of IMAGERY!


    Your descriptive language in this was tangible!


    This was like lyrical impressionism!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    long time DIIMOND welcome back home , This had me envisioning all da beauty da mind
    could create.....tyte write
     
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    And what a breath taking vision that would be, how beautiful...
     
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