Black Poetry : Im your crack addiction: An Ode 2 my Pookie

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im your crack addiction: An Ode 2 my Pookie

    I am your natural high,
    in the sky,
    thick thigs..
    My o My,
    Im your,
    "8ball",
    your "grammy"
    Your "Quarter Pounder"
    whatever gets you high,
    Im your soul selection,
    the definition of perfection..
    or natural selection,
    you choose me ,
    yet I chose you,
    a long time ago,
    to eat,
    sleep,
    and breath me thru,
    n thru...
    Im your crack addiction pookie..
    Since that first high you were hooked,
    the ambers in your eyes
    were lit wit fire,
    when you realized I,
    was YOUR desire..
    Your music is the manifestation of my passion,
    for life..
    for you,
    and all that lies between,
    which aint much,
    but you, I feign..
    the touchm
    of the other that..
    we crave so much,
    but feelings of such is so unjust,
    because you have only spoke my name,
    about 3,000 times,
    thought about me more than I can rhyme,
    i just figured Id let you know,
    I'm your crack addiction pookie,
    and you know what they say..
    once a crack head forever you'll stay,
    And I aint gunna let you go !
    No way!
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this piece and it was well written. I liked the format. The format made it easy to read. Thank you for posting it.

    Peace

    Patrice

    PS Ode to my Pookie is a great title. if you want to keep both titles then one could be a subtitle.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nothing like getting addicted to something like dis ....
    tyte drop sis
     
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    Awesome.
    Popo.
     
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    Nice addiction to you
    Love the way this was flowed
    Very nice poet
     
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    Thank yall for the love... :ilu:
     
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    Good stuff! hee hee, really good, feeling this sis, thanks for this vibe, loving it, D.S.
     
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    love the flow flow on poet.:spinstar:
     
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    Love your work poet
     
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    Awe shucks...My PoeticAngel...U didnt have to dedicate a whole piece about my favorite drug in the world which is YOU...As long as YOU keep getting me high, I would neva stray off to another substance...

    4eva Yourz,
    Pookie
    aka
    Drizz
     
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