Black Poetry : I'm walking through the pages..

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  1. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I walk through the pages of my teenage journals, I walk high with pride and joy..
    I realise things have changes...I have changes..but yet I am a stronger person...
    I walk through the pages of my journal I realise somethings are still deep within me and others are but a distant memory..I read of my frist kiss, and I wonder where he is, and if he remembers me, but then again..I realise that I only remember his name but not his face...I read of the first time I fell in love at age 15, and I think, wow, we are still best friends.. dispite things not working out, he's my brother now and he loves me and I love him dearly.

    I walk but struggle to get past some parts of my life still..I'm standing still at these pages and trying to get by...Okay, maybe I'll just jump over to other parts of the journal with the pages that I can walk throught...I'm walking my way to victory as I turn the pages and read...do you get my drift?
     
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    i like it

    keep up the good work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes!!! keep on dis sweet journey u so quested
     
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    O THANKS GUYS, i THINK I WAS JUST FEELING VERY REFLECTIVE WHEN I WROTE THIS PIECE...THANKS FOR FEELING ME..

    LO'
     
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    lo'.


    i get your drift!! :)

    i know exactly what you mean!! i still have my high school
    journal after alllll these years. i'm amazed at how much
    i've grown mentally & emotionally... everytime i read it.

    thanks for this!! :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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