Black Poetry : I'm Walking Out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by legit-writer, Jan 4, 2003.

  1. legit-writer

    legit-writer Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This summer started off so good
    Until July the first
    You’re always screaming in my face
    Today is even worse
    You call yourself ruling over me
    An arrogant so and so, no doubt
    You want to replace me so **** thoroughly
    You won 'cause I’m waking out.

    You say I can’t do anything
    When all you do is sit
    And eat on Domino's Pizza chicken wings
    And waiting for me to *****
    You sit around and cable watch
    While you would have me pout
    This year you are going to dirty pots
    Cause honey, I’m wlaking out

    Stirring up all kinds of nonsense
    To keep you satisfied
    Claiming that you are tense
    You don't even have to lie
    You never listen to my side
    You make some stupid choice
    You even try to make me cry
    And never want to hear my voice
    Well I am sick of being sweet
    I'll say it plain and loud
    I'm sick of you abusing me
    So I'll be walking out.
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You sit around and cable watch
    While you would have me pout
    This year you are going to dirty pots
    Cause honey, I’m wlaking out

    lol

    my favorite part right there

    nice work keep it up

    and havent seen you before so welcome!

    and i wouldnt be mad at u if you checked out my posts

    lol

    holla
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i agree wit lonelypoet dat was the part indeed
     
  4. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was too good, and i also have to agree with lonelypoet about that being my favorite part
     
  5. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Legit-Writer ... I enjoyed this one too ... Welcome Again

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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