Black Poetry : I'm Under Your Spell...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another song :)



    VERSE 1:

    under your spell i suddenly fell
    so unexpectedly, i could not prevail
    its like you got me wrapped up
    not set free, what's up?
    out love is unique, no one can compete
    nobody else would do all this for me
    under your command, i understand
    that i want you, and you only as my man


    CHORUS:

    lately
    it feels like a dream and
    our love is eternal
    never ending regardless
    let the worst **** happen
    we'll make it through right on
    i know you are me for me
    and i'm made for you
    oh baby
    i truly do love you


    VERSE 2:

    i wish i could think of the right words to say
    my lovin' for you gets stronger every second
    with your hand in mine i feel so secure
    your love wraps around me like clouds on the sun
    baby
    you satisfy me
    you supply my every need
    and i want you constantly


    HOOK:

    baby you and me
    together as strong as can be
    you got me feelin' unusual
    but what can i do?
    i'm under your spell...
     
  2. legit-writer

    legit-writer Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was a really nice song or poem. I liked the way you put the words together like that. Keep on writing and you will get some published one day.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks its a song....thanks for the compliments :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    stay under da spell coz u meserized by da pen
    another one set this CD will be tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    all these songs too come here girl let me hug u .....
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm lovin' your songs, Lovely!
    You sent me down memory lane
    wit' it!
    Peace and love!
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, awwwwwwwww rich your so sweet to me:) got me feelin' all happy now, lol

    thanks so much skrybe!!:)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all these songs....:) Girl, you're given us a head up for you in the music bi ness!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, i have alot of them...thanks swtT...
     
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