Black Poetry : IM UGLY : PERSONAL

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  1. THETRUTH

    THETRUTH Active Member MEMBER

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    I HATE THE FACT THAT IM UGLY

    I HATE THE FACT THAT IM ME

    I LONG FOR THE APPRECIATION MOST HAVE

    CAUSE THATS THE ONE THING IM MISSING

    I MAY SEEM PERFECT TO THE NAKED EYE

    BUT INSIDE MY HEART IS BATTERED UP AND READY TO FRY

    OTHERS MAY PICK ON ME, CAUSE THEY WANT TO BE ME

    BUT MY INSECURITY IS WHAT THEY CANT SEE

    THEY DONT REALIZE THEY HAVE SOMETHING IM IN NEED OF

    THAT IS APPRECIATION FOR MYSELF AND WHO I AM AND WHAT I STAND FOR

    CAUSE SELF ESTEEM IS SOMETHING I NEED MORE

    IM SO USED TO IT BEING LOW

    SOMETIMES IM LOST IN MY OWN MIND ON WHICH DIRECTION TO GO

    I HATE THAT I HAVE TO FEEL THIS WAY, BUT IT WONT GO AWAY

    I WANT TO BE NORMAL LIKE OTHERS AROUND ME

    CAUSE MY INSECURITY IS KILLING ME


    **ALL HAIL THE TRUTH*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word ......keep ya head high enough to see
    and low enough to know and what u seek is in stor .

    nice write poet
     
  3. THETRUTH

    THETRUTH Active Member MEMBER

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    what does that mean?
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It means that the appreciation that you long to have for yourself will come with time. You have to be the one to start seeing yourself in a new light because no one else can see your true inner beauty if you hide it. I like your honesty in this poem.
     
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    THANK U...I THINK AN HONEST POET HAS THE BETTER CONNECTION WITH HE/SHES READERS ON A PERSONAL LEVEL....NOT THE FOURTH IMGINARY WALL.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your most welcome glad I could be of some assistance, true honesty is the best way to reach anyone.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What's normal to you, may be weird to someone else, and viceversa. Love the uniqueness that is you, those that matter will love it too. Keep flowing with the truth.
     
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    all i have to say about that is that beauty comes from within if you believe that God loves you then that is all the beauty you need everyone has there own beauty
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dammmmmmmmmmmnnn i was feelin dis on the real
    i felt like dis for the longest, but i am now gettin betta
    cuz im kickin the devil out my head
    and u kno he is a lie
    and dis feelin aint fair doh
    yo i luv dis piece honest to God i did
    but 2 me u aint ugly, cuz beauty is skin deep
    dont eva forget dat
    so flo on wit nonstop
    frum yo sistah G.A



    blackluv and bp
     
  10. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was some deep emotional write poet flo on.:welldone:
     
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