Black Poetry : I'm Trying...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BrownEyed Girly, Jul 12, 2005.

  1. BrownEyed Girly

    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm trying to become an Earth mother
    An adventurer
    An explorer like
    Dora
    :)
    I'm trying not to let my past
    Get the best of me
    Keep me seated
    And sedated
    With a pretty purse full of regrets
    I'm trying to talk softly
    So people won't hear my voice
    All wild
    Free
    And out of control
    I'm trying to be lady like
    Use proper English
    Wear heels
    Instead of being rugged
    And girly
    I'm trying to save the world
    Be a feminist
    Be strong in my beliefs
    And firm as a tree
    I'm trying
    I'm trying
    I'm dieing
    I'm trying
    I'm sick of trying !!!!!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee

    Very Nice BrownEyed Girly

    Stay strong in sprit and in your beliefs. All one can do is try! If one does all they can, then there are no regrets because one tried. Always prepare and be ready, and the opportunity will present itself.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    don't give up , keep trying inspiring the faith & hope u pose
    don't let go give in or up try , try again soon your gonna break
    through ........flow on and stay a sail
     
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    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u both. I appreciate the words of encouragement!
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Trying

    I like the flow of this poem. :toast:
     
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