Black Poetry : IM THRU (I HATE U)

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  1. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Y do u hurt me?
    Leave me? Desert me?
    And I'm only left to cry
    Wanting to kno y
    U do the things u do
    Wut did I do to u??
    I HATE YOU
    When I'm holdin ur seed
    Will u still run the streets?
    A million things runnin thru my mind
    Will we be together down the line?
    That u make me walk, day in and day out
    Boy wut are u about?
    About to be outta my brains
    Cuz u drivin me insane....
    I HATE YOU..I say, not knowin wut I mean
    But I CANT hate u, ur the man of my dreams
    Or at least I thought u was...
    I got a bad buzz...u say she's ur cuz??
    In da back of ur car?!?!
    This ish gon too far
    I HATE YOU FOOL
    and this time I mean it
    Umma scream it
    Umma show it
    Run around da block and let erry1 kno it!
    That chik u was wit....
    Thats all on ur ish?
    She can have u boo
    Cuz um str8 up thru wit u
    and ur:
    Yellin and screamin
    Lying, misleading
    Late nights and cheating
    Excuses and beatings
    Them broads and their scheming
    Them chickens and beefing
    Ur boyz always creepin
    IM THRU
    Crying confused
    Thinkin of u
    Not knowin wut to do
    Beatin dem h03z
    And U Bein N Control.....Of My Life
    Boy I got my pride
    And umma take this ride
    To make errything right
    That u messed up in my life
    IM THRU
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love reading your work it's raw and full of emotion.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very deep emotions flowin
    all love why hurt ....tyte
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very deep emotions flowing
    flow on...:angel1:
     
  5. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u all : Caramelpython, $$RICH$$, and Mzblkangel...for ur luv n support!!
    I luv my destee fam!! **muah**
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise sistah likewise ...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling you on this scribe sis release it in the flow
    much love
    Peace
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, pick up your head & step.

    Liked it much, nice style, diggin' it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True emotional in your face scribe. Sometimes our pen just has to scream.
     
  10. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u bluewater, positivemindset, and watzinaname. I luv yall!!!
    thats exactly wut i felt like doin at that moment, screaming-- but i think writting this poem was juss as good ;)
     
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