Black Poetry : I'm Thinking

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaneak, Apr 9, 2001.

  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I sit mesmerize...ing
    Myself about what lies between your thighs
    That nice long shaft
    Let me guide you through my path
    Wait… please.
    I’m still thinking.

    As you stand there dripping wet.
    Let me get the bed set.
    Don’t move…
    I’ll dry you off.
    Cause what I plan to do to you
    Will definitely get you hard.
    Yes, I’m in my world.
    Still thinking.
    Of kissing you from head to toe.
    And licking…no…no…sucking
    Where only you’ll know.

    Erotic sensations
    Deep penetration

    I can feel your body shudder.
    As my hot meet your cold.
    Our bodies begin to fold
    Bringing us as one.
    For this has just begun.

    But I’m still thinking.
     
  2. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are on the right track

    keep thinking and you'll receive

    felt the flow
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    take yo' time...

    ...if it's done right, he's not going anywhere.
    personally,
    i like your style
    and your flow.

    keep doing that thing you do.
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now ain't that the truth... But i was truly just thinking ;)

    Baller:

    Thanks for the compliment... It's always nice to know that someone appreciates my work. I had decided to put it out here to get some feedback from people other than my close friends. They are constantly insisting on me doing a book. But...in due time. ;) I really appreciate it though.

    Thanks alot...

    To both of you.
     
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