Black Poetry : i'm thinking

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by whisper, Jan 17, 2004.

  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 25, 2003
    Messages:
    96
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    new artist developer, music promoter ,manage hip-h
    Location:
    indianapolis, indiana
    Ratings:
    +0
    im thinking la la
    cause the world is tripping
    and i cant get a tune in my head
    im thinking la la
    cause no happiness im seeing
    and that makes me rather sad
    im thinking la la
    cause if i lose my la la
    i might just lose some of my peace
    to lose my la la
    is like losing
    a hell that never cease
    its the sound of the la la
    that keeps me sane
    without the la la
    life would be in vain
    im thinking la la
    cause thats what i say
    when you smile
    but you have a dirty eye
    i m saying la la
    cause i know its gonna get me by
    say la la to yourself
    maybe a couple of times
    you see how that feels
    that bull--- just goes bye
    im thinking that this la la is
    my new "in"
    cause im not letting s---
    get under my skin
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    whoaa
    dis was awesome drop
     
  3. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 12, 2003
    Messages:
    265
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Philly
    Ratings:
    +3
    i know what you mean. hot drop.


    Roni
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    I really liked this one. Happens to me when I need some ease, a tune just keeps repeating in my head, I think this happens to a lot of us sometimes...This was on point.
     
  5. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jan 15, 2004
    Messages:
    592
    Likes Received:
    10
    Ratings:
    +10
    Excellent

    I have the la la going on too. do your thang!!!!!!! tight
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    nice drop...
    i likes
    Angel
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 30, 2003
    Messages:
    5,322
    Likes Received:
    38
    Location:
    ~The hidden library...~
    Ratings:
    +39
    I have several "la las" that keep me at peace
    relating to what you're saying here...
    so hang on to that la la...
    this was real...
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Nov 26, 2002
    Messages:
    1,601
    Likes Received:
    14
    Location:
    Rocky Mountains, High
    Ratings:
    +14
    I really feel this.

    Keep it comin'.
     
  9. rahstagal

    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 4, 2003
    Messages:
    54
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Real cute...Nicely put
    I'm wanting more
    anticipating more pieces....i'll be watchin out

    praise
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 5, 2003
    Messages:
    4,020
    Likes Received:
    32
    Occupation:
    strength coach
    Location:
    Seattle, WA
    Ratings:
    +32
    oh my god I am so feelin this. I def have my own version of a la la, and it keeps me floatin in this world. whisper, this is a helluva way to come back to the board. mad props
     
Loading...