Black Poetry : IM THEONE

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  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IM THEONE (rough unfin.)

    :sand: I usually try not to paint picture about myself, but its supposibly the end of my week, so I thought, OH....Welll

    What better way to end it then with a description of me
    How will I it put for you to see what I see

    How would I depict myself in my final hours.................
    Descriptions #1 Brain power

    Thats THEONE thing not clarified in my name
    THEONE searching for prosperity, not fortune or fame!

    Im not THEONE that walks around with an arogant swagger
    But I keep my head up and my confidence is on point like dagger

    Im THEONE that people always fails to mention
    Im THEONE it doenst bother cause I dont need there attention

    Im not THEONE on the cornor selling them drugs
    I am on the cornor keeping it thug
    Reminding myself were I came from flashing a mugg!

    I aint THEONE in a shoot out or just keep it gangsta!
    I dont high cap, floss or bragg, I aint no prankster!

    I am THEONE who's nemisis cant be called his enenmy
    Cause being THEONE I dont want eny of him in me!

    Im THEONE always keepin it real
    Family comes first in THEONE's book, and thats keepin treal!

    Im THEONE who will struggle if he has to
    No mountain unclimbable, Im THEONE that has too!

    Im THEONE THEONE THEONE

    And dont mistake me for any other
    I dont place myself on a throne, Im yo average brother

    Im just THEONE that sometimes thinks deeper
    Dont take me for granted cause THEONE's a thinker

    I ponder ways THEONE can brighten other peoples days
    Im THEONE with the exit sign to lifes hetic maze!

    IM THEONE that seems unfaithfull, unsteady, and really off the hook
    But THEONE knows God, and follows the good book

    THEONE's learning GOD, to solidify his foundation
    Yeah, THEONE aint perfect, he submits temptations

    Im THEONE thats real laid back, but too hype, I sing but dont rhyme
    Im THEONE who speaks suttle, with loud meaning most of the time

    Im THEONE, and no Im not the best
    Im THEONE....... up for any test

    Im THEONE who gets up, after being knock down
    Persistance is #1 thats how THEONE stays around

    So dont sleep on a brotha or doubt that Im able
    Just remeber Im THEONE and this is what I bring to the table!!!

    THnks Destee's fam!!!!!

    By: Lj
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep your THEONE
    tight piece here flow on
    wit ya bad self....
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THNKS MZXBLCKANGEL for the read and your support, :grouphug: :star: :grouphug: :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u are THEONE wit da master flow
    tyte poet of the week u shinning bright as always
     
  5. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: Right ON RICH$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
    Thnks for the read and props!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bowdown:
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're the one with talent enough to write about self without it appearing to be boastful, the one just is.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THNKS WTZ IN A NNAME, I appreciate the read, I was trying so hard not to appear that way
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm THE ONE who reads your write,
    I'm THE ONE who thinks it's nice
    I'm THE ONE too say...keep moving.
    You're THE ONE who keeps it grooving.

    you bring much joy to this family and we are happy to have you here.
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright!!!!

    You the man!

    Im THEONE who gets up, after being knock down
    Persistance is #1 thats how THEONE stays around
    Tight drop :heart:
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THEONE,

    Just reading and enjoying you flowin, goin, knowin, growin.......................
    keep it comin
    it's all showin..

    Peace and Blessings
     
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