Black Poetry : I'M THE PUNCHLINE KING

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Aug 22, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even as a teacher you couldn’t be a creature with knowledge
    Your feature is garbage so why seek leisure in college?

    Not clever and firm you’ll never learn to rhyme
    Rhymes not true bloom why you assume you can rap?
    Stand and yap junk you crap punk, say what you sees land on map?

    Can’t navigate ship or elevate in script you float a boat
    With no hope that’s sinking and stinking like a Titanic joke

    You pretend you ill but your blend don’t kill whack trend
    don’t fill hope you spill dope like and addict you lack dividends
    you appear false clear across the globe where your black river end?

    Hinder success please surrender don’t impress even with a blender
    Couldn’t mix best, couldn’t fix a nest of bees with honey and its tender
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop....
    likes the style!!!
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I couldn't agree more...
    if your gonna flow make it count...
    enlighten...don't just entertain...

    this was crucial...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am feelin the sentiment here and vibin on the tight delivery
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i feel u here u really took it to da floor here
    expressing da thangggggggg bruh !
     
  6. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hhey yall thanks for the props for real got to keep dropping this
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    droppin it like it's :hot: this is truth to the fullest..........drop it brotha, drop another.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lilcherry76 thanks for t6he props for real
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey bruh we want more of dis here it was da bomb drop it on down !
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK RICH gonna try drop more punches for real
     
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